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Poetry/Verse/Bait
Copyright Protected, ID 04-1634-015-04
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, April 04, 2024
For the International Contest, Babel, Bait, Blame, Blank Cheque
Sponsor, Sotto Poet, Judged, 04/10/2024

First Place

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"Injure my heart and it lasts forever."

                                         Quote by _Constance

"Inspired by Title #2, Bait- Better to shun the bait than struggle in the snare." Quote by _William Blake
During my life I have met people, who leave beautiful footprints in my heart: and others who stay forever with me, but there are some people who bait me; into a trap of torment, lies, and deceit. These people trick me with stories, of despair that fill me with sadness and worry: believing- I offer my love and heart, they cajole me, beguile and bedevil me; until I find out they are making it all up. I am left feeling stupid and gullible, how could I let myself be pulled in so easily: they used my kindness and sympathy, tricked me, baited me, lured me with lies; I need to banish, avoid and ignore them. I believe the devil sends such people, to test us, to snare us into evil, to break our faith: the devil wishes to tempt and seduce us, and I must rid myself of this struggle; send them away no matter their excuse.

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Date: 4/11/2024 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Sara K
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Constance La France
Date: 4/11/2024 6:07:00 PM
Sara, thank you for the congratulations and compliment, hugs
Date: 4/4/2024 5:18:00 PM
looking forward to reading your completed poem, Sara
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Constance La France
Date: 4/6/2024 4:22:00 PM
Sara, thank you for the comment, hope you can come back, hugs

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