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Back To Bed

"You stir the peak of my night holding my vision in sight. The blue of your eye roams in my midnight sky"     She entered and grabbed my soul   light danced across the oaken floor   my eyes fluttered, at the thought   of these feelings that you brought     soft caresses amounting   to more than just a morning ride   as your scent on my pillow pushed   ever into the recesses   of what was a battered mind     welcome was the sun and the wind chimes   playing along with every pang and patter   tiptoeing my chambers deep inside     a stirring called to hurry and leave   clouded or just a fantasy   springing in this fear   I took one more breath of you   and your blue pulled me back to bed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/25/2018 9:37:00 PM
This is fabulous, of course I love it!!!!
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Date: 4/21/2018 6:32:00 PM
Did your eyes flutter in REM sleep? Into your dream did she creep?
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Date: 4/20/2018 8:18:00 PM
Very cool Tim. This was fantastic
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Date: 4/20/2018 4:32:00 PM
another gem slides off your pen so smoothly Tim:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/20/2018 1:14:00 PM
The last two lines really compliment your well-written poem...Enjoyed...All the best Tim
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Date: 4/20/2018 12:57:00 PM
- A heartbreaking poem, Tim - Up of the bed ... enjoy the spring :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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