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Baby Im Still Broken

Baby I’m Still Broken It’s like a day that never comes. A promise that’s unspoken. A dream that never does come true. And baby, I’m still broken. I don’t know if I told you. Or if I failed to mention. Deceiving you in anything has not been my intention. But who I am and used to be, they aren’t so far between. A mix of all the things I’ve done and all the things I’ve seen. The monster known from childhood that lived beneath my bed. Now it seems to me at least, resides inside my head. Coming back from time to time I feel it drawing nearer. I can see it’s eyes in mine when I look in the mirror. Still I try with all I am I try with all my might. To be the man you need me to and help you through the night. Clinging to your love for me and promises we’ve spoken. Pushing through to get to you but baby I’m still broken. Edwin C Hofert

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Date: 1/18/2018 12:07:00 PM
I have a feeling we might have similar childhoods. If that is the case my heart goes out to you. I wrote a book that was published 5 years ago called "DUMMY, Hurtful and Healing Words." In writing the book I have learned that few people have had an ideal childhood.
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Date: 12/16/2017 12:20:00 PM
The ending of the poem gave me a huge lump in my throat Edwin and I guess many can relate:-( so lovely to see you back Edwin:-) hugs jan xx
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 12/16/2017 12:24:00 PM
Its great to be back!
Date: 12/16/2017 8:31:00 AM
Awesome pen.
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 12/16/2017 10:43:00 AM
Thank you Maureen! Merry Christmas!

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