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Avalanche

It was all in the balance, Freezing Artic weather, Blizzards of falling snow, Accumulating rapidly, Just a matter of time, The mountain held the weight, It gathered, Deeper and heavier, But for how long? How much could it hold? Before turning, Into a ticking time bomb, Exploding and falling, Most times unnoticed, Regular occurrences, From human eyes, Other times masses, Speeding, Descending, Turning deadly, Changing course, And firing its trigger, Shattering like a pane of glass, Too much too quickly, Downhill powered, The whole village, Unexpected, Thousands of innocent people, Covered and wiped out, Buried, Under the avalanche disasters, 07/01/2017

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Date: 1/19/2017 2:46:00 PM
I heard the news of the hotel in Italy and your poem is such a vivid descriptive write on these terrible tragedies:-( hugs Jan xx
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 1/19/2017 4:34:00 PM
Thank you, Jan for reading my poem x I wrote it two weeks ago I had watched a program on the tv and it really touched me x
Date: 1/13/2017 6:47:00 PM
so sad to know that whole villages can be destroyed that way! Very descriptive, Wendy!
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 1/14/2017 12:39:00 PM
Thank you Andrea x

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