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Autumn's Fall

Frozen flakes on my windowpane tell me Autumn has left again. Crystals forming on the glass whisper that season now has passed. 28/05/2016. Taken from AS AUTUMN'S BREEZE for Gregory R Barden's 'Rithimus Divisa 6' Poetry Contest

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Eve Roper

Date: 1/14/2021 11:28:00 AM

The weather sure has done a lot of change these few years. Like the imagery, Jean. Hugs Eve

Jean Murray
Date: 1/14/2021 1:54:00 PM

Although we have not had any snow worth talking about yet Eve, I still get a bit of SAD now and again.

James Inman

Date: 10/3/2020 9:48:00 AM

A lovely image filled rhyme.

Jean Murray
Date: 10/3/2020 12:58:00 PM

Thank you James for taking a peek.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/22/2020 7:44:00 AM

- A beautiful picture ... but cold, Jean ... I hope there is a bit left of autumn ... I have been out and photographed the colors of autumn today :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray
Date: 9/22/2020 9:19:00 AM

Hello Sunshine. Autumn is a favourite time of mine. We have had some unusually mild weather here and are soaking up the last rays. Thank you as always for your good wishes.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/22/2020 6:38:00 AM

I can feel the chill in your verse Jean. Good luck in the contest. Hope you're well. Tom

Jean Murray
Date: 9/22/2020 9:17:00 AM

Hi Tom. I'm good thank you. It's a strange world these days, but thankfully me and mine are keeping well. I hope you and yours are too.