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Autumnal Marvel

Rustling blades of ruby float on my front lawn, gazebo flooded with gold and chartreuse leaves- I sit at my bay window, in awe I fawn, Autumn's pure beauty comforts and relieves. So much more than summertime perceives. For hope is found in Autumn’s crimson tide, the summer has ended with no time to spare- Inviting mother nature as our precious guide, no other season created could compare. I bow my head and say a grateful prayer. Saffron skies float over the rising sun, the east is full of grand medallion lights- My daughter jumping in the leaves for fun, then roasting marshmallows on chilly nights. Autumnal marvel bestows splendid sights. September 19, 2019 Chantelle Anne Cooke Fall Into Fall Poetry Contest

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Date: 9/24/2019 5:59:00 PM
‘My daughter jumping in the leaves for fu. What a lovely image. Congratulations on your winning poem. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 9/24/2019 12:53:00 PM
- Congratulations on your lovely win poem, L.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/24/2019 10:38:00 AM
Lu congratulations on your win in the contest with this lovely poem!
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Date: 9/23/2019 1:31:00 AM
Laura I knew this would win! Congratulations!;)
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Date: 9/23/2019 12:28:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win. It is lovely and I'm going to fave it :) Blessings to you
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Date: 9/22/2019 5:57:00 PM
i love the colors of autumn, and remember my share of jumping in fresh leaves, and the scents of autumn wonderful...not a fan of the chilly air and the cold air it brings, but love love love your poem....congrats on your win my friend :) hugs
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Date: 9/20/2019 7:09:00 AM
"My daughter jumping in the leaves for fun, then roasting marshmallows on chilly nights." This makes the poem complete, Lu Loo. Totally delightful!
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Date: 9/19/2019 6:02:00 PM
My favorite time of year captured in your inspiring poem. Hugzz, SuZ
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/20/2019 7:07:00 AM
aww thanks sweet Suzanne :)-luloo
Date: 9/19/2019 8:25:00 AM
This is beautiful. I love it. All my best for a win. God bless you.. Autumn is my favorite season by far
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/20/2019 7:06:00 AM
thank you so much sweet Regina :)-luloo

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