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Autumn Stroll

Crisp winds Her cheeks blown red She snuggles close for warmth A long walk among falling leaves Perfect Contest: Autumn Stroll Cinquain Form Sponsor: Eve Roper Written: 10/21/2015

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Skat A

Date: 10/29/2015 9:08:00 PM

Greg, Congratulations on your "Autumn Stroll win." Love SKAT

Kim Merryman

Date: 10/28/2015 9:52:00 PM

A sweet, cozy picture, Greg! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

James Inman

Date: 10/27/2015 8:29:00 AM

Very nice feelings with this, Greg. Nicely done.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/24/2015 7:59:00 AM

Very nice! You did it very succinctly. I have written three stanzas I think (not posted yet) and in my poem, the girl also snuggles up to someone!

Greg Hoffman
Date: 10/24/2015 10:27:00 AM

Fall is a good time to snuggle.Thanks for commenting

Greg Hoffman
Date: 10/24/2015 10:24:00 AM

Fall is a good time to snuggle.Thanks for commenting

Laura Leiser

Date: 10/21/2015 11:36:00 PM

Enjoyed the word picture you created with your Autumn haiku, Greg! Good luck in the contest :)

Greg Hoffman
Date: 10/24/2015 10:20:00 AM

Thank you Laura for commenting

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/21/2015 10:26:00 PM

Very nice Greg, the perfect walk indeed. Bg

Greg Hoffman
Date: 10/24/2015 10:19:00 AM

Barbara thanks for stopping by and commenting