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Autumn Adventure - Etheree

The cool morn makes him wish for more sleep. Still, he goes and takes in nature’s treat: misty lake, stony peaks, the colored trees, autumn sounds and sights… poetry. Humbled, he psyches himself to go down. He conquered the proud mountain and was awed.
25 September, 2015 For Love of October Contest Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

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Date: 12/9/2015 1:59:00 AM
A very excellent piece....congratulations on your win.......A.M.
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Date: 10/3/2015 6:33:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Etherees are delightful..Sara
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Date: 10/7/2015 11:52:00 PM
Thank you, Sara! hugs
Date: 10/2/2015 10:28:00 PM
Hi Kim, congratulations on your awesome Etheree win. <3 SKAT
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Date: 10/1/2015 12:14:00 PM
Kim, congrats on your win. I know I never want to leave the mountains. I get my inspiration there and your poem makes me miss them more. Hugs, my friend. :) Janece
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Date: 10/1/2015 8:30:00 AM
I love the shape you used to enhance this beautiful write...Congrats on your win Kim
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Date: 10/1/2015 3:06:00 AM
One of my top favorites Kim. Nice win!
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Date: 10/1/2015 2:24:00 AM
oh and it does look just like a little mountain the way it is formatted! Very nice one,Kelly! Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 9/29/2015 7:37:00 PM
I so enjoyed the shape complimenting the content! Light & Love
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Date: 9/28/2015 9:43:00 PM
Kim, this is wonderful. I felt this way when I climbed a mountain in Newfoundland this summer. Excellent write! Hugs
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Date: 9/28/2015 7:16:00 PM
Lol!!! Love how you wave this dear poet. Hope this win the contest...love always.........A.M.
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Date: 9/28/2015 9:44:00 AM
Wow this is unparalleled.The majestic picture along with your beautiful lines created some true artistic synergy.
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Date: 9/27/2015 6:52:00 PM
Simply majestic Kim. Just to look at that reflection on the pristine pond. The mist of fog floating blending into the proud mountain. Beautiful. Thanks for directing me here.
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Date: 9/26/2015 4:31:00 PM
This Kim is another poem that appeals to the senses, but in a different way than your ABC. Love the imagery (and the visual); you manage to leave the reader in awe! #7 Hugs // paul
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Date: 9/26/2015 1:05:00 PM
This is a glorious addition to the contest. Well done! Nature is poetry, that's for sure! The photo alone awes me. Always, Laura
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Date: 9/26/2015 4:05:00 AM
sweet!!!!
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Date: 9/25/2015 6:17:00 PM
Beautiful etheree, Kim :) I enjoyed it!
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Date: 9/25/2015 5:52:00 PM
Absolutely Beautiful (capital B intended) Kim, I can feel, hear and see your images. : )
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Date: 9/25/2015 4:55:00 PM
aww...that is awesome.. an adventure in your words...poetry! :)
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