Autumn

A brisk afternoon late in the fall Upon the colorful oak, shedding its leaves Taking a moment to observe the scenery Under the golden glow of the imminent sunset Mind is at ease, yet in awe of the world Nothing compares to this time of year

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Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 10/27/2021 1:03:00 PM

Avery, Autumn is my favorite time of year, and you capture it so well. Blessings, Paulette

Avery Won
Date: 10/28/2021 4:35:00 AM

Mine as well - thank you!

Laura Leiser

Date: 9/29/2021 7:55:00 AM

Beautifully written, Avery! Enjoyed this! :)

Avery Won
Date: 9/29/2021 9:48:00 AM

Thank you Laura :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/27/2021 12:16:00 PM

HelloAvery Won, right! There is nothing like this time of the year.enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/27/2021 3:58:00 PM

Hello Avery Won, oh, you are welcome my friend. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Avery Won
Date: 9/27/2021 12:55:00 PM

Indeed - thank you, you too :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/27/2021 9:04:00 AM

got to agree nothing compares to this time of year, its my favourite of the seasons:-) hugs jan xx

Avery Won
Date: 9/27/2021 12:55:00 PM

So pretty to watch :) Thanks for stopping by!