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At Oceans Door

Dare we wade these tempered shores less fear of what the next wave brings a tidal rush playing fates encore with the music of a thousand wings This last primeval surge of mystery completes its voyage at our feet lost from time's forgotten history it seeks true peace without deceit Each drop a story yet may recount of places seen where myths awake it brings to us this last account of trials faced and risks to take From darkened depths life will surely rise When hope brings light to sightless eyes

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Date: 4/16/2018 4:40:00 PM
Sonnets are a favorite of mine, and this a very nice brightly morbid one.
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Date: 1/31/2018 1:12:00 PM
Hello Charlie,the sea does have a lot of risk, a place to be if there is no storms.To be on the water is calming. I do like this poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 1/31/2018 1:14:00 PM
Thank you Darlene...
Date: 1/29/2018 10:49:00 PM
Charlie, I like how you capture both the hopes and risks of the sea (from my previous years of experience as a full-time mariner, it really is that), and keep it all on course within your theme. Well done!! Fair winds and following seas to you, sir. :) Bartholomew
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Charlie Smith
Date: 1/30/2018 10:41:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words Bartholomew...
Date: 1/29/2018 8:09:00 PM
Very nice Sonnet, Charlie, enjoyed the story very much ... congratulations on your win, my friend! :-)
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Charlie Smith
Date: 1/29/2018 8:18:00 PM
Thank you Gregory.
Date: 1/29/2018 7:49:00 PM
A well-written and thought-provoking Sonnet, Charle. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Sandra
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Charlie Smith
Date: 1/29/2018 8:17:00 PM
Thank you Sandra...
Date: 1/29/2018 7:09:00 PM
Love your sonnets, Charlie! Congratulations on your win! ...Fran
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Charlie Smith
Date: 1/29/2018 8:17:00 PM
Thank you Francis.
Date: 1/29/2018 4:31:00 PM
Beautiful write, Charlie, congratulations on your win :)
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Charlie Smith
Date: 1/29/2018 8:16:00 PM
Thank you Eve...
Date: 1/29/2018 4:15:00 PM
Beautiful sonnet, Charlie. Marvelously done. Congrats on your win.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 1/29/2018 8:15:00 PM
Thank you Line...
Date: 1/29/2018 2:23:00 PM
Charlie, Congratulations on your win. With Lots Of Love *SKAT*
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Charlie Smith
Date: 1/29/2018 3:08:00 PM
Thank you Skat...
Date: 1/21/2018 7:31:00 PM
this is beautiful and profound, Charlie.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 1/21/2018 10:13:00 PM
Thank you Andrea...
Date: 1/21/2018 1:57:00 PM
Beautiful write Charlie, especially loved the final couplet, golden words!
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Charlie Smith
Date: 1/21/2018 5:27:00 PM
Thank you John...
Date: 1/19/2018 5:27:00 PM
The last chapter, what mysteries await? Does the book truly finish at the last page, or do we dissolve into the page into another story? Indeed, a thousand Angel Wings. Deep, profound, beautiful poem. LUX VITAE, Charlie, lux vitae. x
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Charlie Smith
Date: 1/26/2018 1:14:00 PM
Thank you so much Leanne, there's always another chapter to any story, it's up to all of us to help write it...
Date: 1/14/2018 9:03:00 AM
An excellent write Charlie, much enjoyed :)
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Charlie Smith
Date: 1/14/2018 9:05:00 AM
Thank you Gary...
Date: 1/13/2018 10:56:00 AM
YOU PRESENT A COMMON STATE IN HUMAN EXISTENCE AND THE TRUTH THAT LIGHT CAN ALLEVIATE THE BLINDNESS THEREIN. Dreams and myths do awake when darkness is banished by light. A true gem and a fav my friend!!
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Charlie Smith
Date: 1/13/2018 1:17:00 PM
Always a pleasure to hear from you friend Robert...
Date: 1/2/2018 3:50:00 PM
Charlie, someone once said, 'Despair is a way of hiding things from ourselves.' Excellent write.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 1/3/2018 8:56:00 AM
Thank you Carlos...
Date: 12/27/2017 8:20:00 AM
Nice one Charlie..
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Charlie Smith
Date: 12/27/2017 8:23:00 AM
Thank you Silent One...
Date: 12/26/2017 8:30:00 PM
lovely, Charlie, you make the sonnet so easy. Hugs eve
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Charlie Smith
Date: 12/27/2017 8:22:00 AM
You are too kind Eve, thank you...
Date: 12/26/2017 4:37:00 PM
Well written Sonnet Charlie--your words flow well --the ending feels spiritual and hopeful.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 12/27/2017 8:21:00 AM
Thank you Vijay...

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