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Ashened Fashion

Ashened Fashion Once a fan of clothing passion she sought to dress in ornate fashion To wear a studded lamé skirt to smile so sultry and to flirt a gemstone bangle on her wrist and necklace twisted made of gold peirced nose bauble to behold then came a time transient wise to leave her body to disguise with less elaborate distress a gothic realm of black and white and Goth into another nest to dissapear as black and night her ashened fashion will unite Fashion Poetry Contest Sponsored by Julia Ward November 15, 2019

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Date: 1/10/2020 6:48:00 PM
I hope this poem is a winner for you Ralph. I really enjoyed it! xxoo
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Date: 11/21/2019 9:03:00 AM
This is so much fun! Good luck in the contest!
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 11/22/2019 7:25:00 AM
Thank You, Rick!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/21/2019 9:04:00 AM
I prefer the earlier fashion. ;0) Flirty and fun all the way.
Date: 11/20/2019 7:13:00 PM
nicely penned...in my line of work i see the teens go from beautiful fashion ins to the drabber gothic style all the time... enjoyed the read, nice rhythm and flow to it... :)
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 11/21/2019 8:36:00 AM
Thank you very much, Sandra. My daughter has your name.
Date: 11/18/2019 11:31:00 AM
Wow she sounds so fashionable and bejewelled and it reads and sounds so poetic and awesomely artistic how you capture her in poetry. Kudos for this splendid poem! Pls pleez do comment on my newest poem too. I would luv to hear from yah.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 11/20/2019 10:25:00 AM
Thank you very much S. zaynah. I will certainly comment on your latest poem!
Date: 11/17/2019 10:33:00 AM
very creative writing and contrast between the two verses.Love the phrase you chose of ashened fashion.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 11/18/2019 8:20:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea: I'm battling dementia, (ha ha)

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