Armageddon

sun rising our heat source moon at night shining bright sea surrounds giving life earth mountains valleys deep man monster killing creep

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/28/2018 2:47:00 PM

It is sad but often true, how man destroys the environment, clear cutting forests, killing endangered species, over fishing the seas, putting toxic wastes into the soil that affects our pure water, all that and more. You lovely poem packs a punch Jean, with just few words. Excellent!

Jean Murray
Date: 10/28/2018 2:57:00 PM

We think alike Connie. No surprise there. Thank you for your input.

Viv Wigley

Date: 10/24/2018 9:46:00 PM

Great ending, jean, congrats! Viv x

Jean Murray
Date: 10/25/2018 5:00:00 AM

Morning Viv! Thank you. I hope all is well with you.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/10/2018 9:06:00 PM

Great string of Haiku, Jean, congratulations on your win. <3

Jean Murray
Date: 10/11/2018 1:31:00 AM

Thank you Eve and good morning.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 10/9/2018 7:12:00 PM

Put a music to it, it can go platinum...

Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/16/2018 3:11:00 AM

LOL...

Jean Murray
Date: 10/10/2018 12:54:00 AM

Now there's a thought....

Charles Messina

Date: 10/9/2018 6:32:00 PM

Great job on this form Jean! Congratulations on your win in my contest and thank you for entering...Charlie

Jean Murray
Date: 10/9/2018 6:59:00 PM

Delighted Charlie and thank you for the placement.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/9/2018 4:26:00 PM

Many congrats on your win Jean, the final poem packs a punch:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray
Date: 10/9/2018 6:58:00 PM

Thank you Jan. Our poor Mother Earth takes a battering.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/9/2018 1:44:00 PM

lovely world of 'ku that deserves a fine win... many congrats, jean!...huggs

Jean Murray
Date: 10/9/2018 5:16:00 PM

Thank you Nette.

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/9/2018 11:59:00 AM

Great one, Jean. Congrats on your top win.

Jean Murray
Date: 10/9/2018 2:51:00 PM

Thank you Line.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/9/2018 11:45:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great haiku, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray
Date: 10/9/2018 2:51:00 PM

Sunshine!! Thank you. Hugs.

Warren Doll

Date: 10/9/2018 10:11:00 AM

Jean, congratulations on your win. ~Warren

Jean Murray
Date: 10/9/2018 12:54:00 PM

Thank you Warren.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/6/2018 4:42:00 AM

Oh Jean, this will certainly be on the winner's list. You wrote it with such seeming ease. Fantastic entry for the contest! I loved it! : )

Jean Murray
Date: 10/6/2018 5:44:00 AM

Good morning Connie. I wish I could have been more upbeat. It's a beautiful world. Hope all is well on your side of it. Thank you for dropping in.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/5/2018 3:04:00 PM

They all evoke the emotions you depict Jean. The sun, moon, sea, earth, and man..sources of good and some inevitable ill-will I suppose. Best for a win, Jean.

Jean Murray
Date: 10/5/2018 5:52:00 PM

Good evening Vijay. With all the plastics in our seas now, man's mischief will end up breaking the chain. Lovely to see your comment. This is for the 1 2 3 or 3 2 1 syllable contest on nature for Charles Messina.