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Ardent Desires

To fall in love with you is a desire To fulfilll that desire is my dream Alas ! This dream is a M I R A G E Red

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Paul Callus

Date: 3/23/2016 4:12:00 PM

I will give you a drink of encouragement, Smriti, and perhaps that mirage will turn into reality...unless it has already come true! :) hugs // paul

Vijay Nair

Date: 8/24/2013 11:45:00 PM

I fell and skipped a beat This desire is no charade Mired in the mirage-

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/17/2013 8:33:00 AM

Red, dreams are beautiful too. You write very beautifully and with your heart. Without dreams it is hard to survive in the desert of life. Take care....

Red Fiery
Date: 8/17/2013 9:11:00 AM

Thank you Eileen :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/17/2013 6:46:00 AM

I woder if mirages were made to cause people in the desert to push a bit further and possibly press on until they find the real thing.

Red Fiery
Date: 8/17/2013 9:11:00 AM

Thank you Richard :)