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Apple Tree

Intoxicate with passion Sweet sugar, Beautiful, Blossoming tree, Tempt to taste, Your flavor, Awaken the artists, Expression, Fermented tree, Drinking fruit, My Eden, Refreshing, Stimulating me, Quenching and, Deliciously, Satisfying Apples, Grown in the garden, Seductively Enticing me. 18/02/2017

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Date: 3/17/2017 9:57:00 AM
Your use of simple words and ideas are easy to digest and strike a common cord of familiarity. Good work! Emile.
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Date: 2/22/2017 7:37:00 AM
Excellent tasty poem. love it. So clever. well done Pete. Loving your work.Very fruity.
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 2/22/2017 3:00:00 PM
Thank you Peter x I'm enjoying these themes x
Date: 2/19/2017 2:50:00 PM
- An apple every day ... keeps the doctor away :) - "As apples of gold in vessels of silver are words that are spoken in due season" - (Bible sitat) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 2/19/2017 3:13:00 PM
Amen sister xx very true x
Date: 2/18/2017 2:47:00 PM
I LOVE IT. it took me to a totally different world. excellent word choice
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 2/18/2017 3:00:00 PM
Thank you, Johnny I can only do short poems your was great x

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