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Apple Pie

Mmmm! Melt in my mouth you flaky apple pie. You're making me drool, you're making me cry. Just a taste on the tip of my tongue. Hurry up now, while i'm still young. I can smell your aroma From miles away, Please give me slice Or here I will stay.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/7/2010 12:43:00 AM
Nice one, Edward. A belated congrats for you!
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Date: 6/7/2010 7:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's Dreamy Desserts contest Edward. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/6/2010 1:38:00 PM
Congrats Edward on your HM in my dessert contest .. and for supporting my efforts to make it fun.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/5/2010 9:01:00 AM
lol i liked this one,, funny. The first stanza was just the cherry on top lol funny and good stuff, good luck on the contest
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Date: 6/5/2010 8:29:00 AM
Nice expressions. Good luck if you are in the contest
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