Apparition

Tendrils of fresh green misting branches long barren suddenly appear Inspired by Carol Browns Springtime contest

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/16/2009 2:26:00 PM

Very nice! blooming perfect! Light & Love Debbie

Arany P.

Date: 2/10/2009 8:22:00 AM

spring is all we await!! love your kaiku!! thank you for you lovely comments!! ~ Arany

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 1/22/2009 6:56:00 AM

This is wonderful in form and the imagery seems so clear with this read. Excellent! Michael

John Rhinem

Date: 1/21/2009 6:19:00 PM

Smile~This sounds like something very extremely wonderful dear lady!!!~ "Hello Precious & Gifted & Radiant Robin!!!"~I am truly & sincerely regretful that I have missed "Your Beauty" these past couple of days!!!~But, "You Are 'Always' Within My Thoughts & Heart With Warmth & Love!!!"~I really like this hope of statement which You seemingly allude to within this piece here~ whether in regards towards Yourself or another!!?~"My Love To You, John!!!":)....On we go....

Maryam Jameela Haniff

Date: 1/21/2009 2:38:00 PM

lovely haiku....pictures spring perfectly....good luck in the contest!.....Maryam

Date: 1/21/2009 9:33:00 AM

Nice use of imagery. Nice take on the contest. Good luck! Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Blessings to you. Karen

Brian Strand

Date: 1/21/2009 7:36:00 AM

Best wishes with this on Robin.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/21/2009 7:19:00 AM

The new beginning...a welcome sign of spring! Awesome haiku! Good luck Robin! ~ Love, Carrie

Christopher Higgins

Date: 1/21/2009 6:00:00 AM

I love the feel of this springtime Haiku. I can't wait for the cold to take a haitus. Well written and thank you for the comments that are always more than welcome. Love, Chris.

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 1/21/2009 5:41:00 AM

beautiful spring haiku! Love, Kristin

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/21/2009 4:15:00 AM

Lovely Spring imagery. Well done. Good luck in the contest! Love, Shar