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Another's Love

She was the one he wanted the one "who got away" no pleading or love making could make her want to stay her hair so blonde and golden with eyes of deepest blue his heart would soon be broken to another man she's true all heads would turn with wonder as she glides across the floor a beauty simply flawless leaving one to wish for more her kisses still remembered from moist lips her nectar sweet as evening comes he finds her amongst flowers ankle deep alas he cannot touch her mirrored only in his sleep...

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Date: 6/22/2015 4:28:00 AM
I know a certain lady with ''hair so blond and golden" who also writes exquisite poetry - Hmmm...
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Date: 12/19/2013 5:40:00 AM
Thinking of you today Sharon ,as I read this wonderful but sad poem of longing that can never be again .Christmas is such a hard time of the year now. Hugs Anne
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Date: 10/21/2013 7:16:00 PM
sad and beautiful one. I really enjoyed the read.
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Date: 10/19/2013 11:57:00 AM
Hi Sharon, Awesome write depicting yearning.. Ken
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Sharon Ruebel
Date: 10/21/2013 11:46:00 AM
Hello Ken, Thank you for reading me. I am happy that you like this one...Have a great week.. Lov, Shar
Date: 10/19/2013 9:34:00 AM
Beautiful portrayal of love's loss and the longing for what we cannot have.
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Sharon Ruebel
Date: 10/19/2013 11:27:00 AM
Tank you Monterey, I am glad you liked it. I was inspired.... Smiles, Shar

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