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The account below is nonfiction.  One of my interests is Christian Apologetics.  Part of my involvement with this included reading Atheistic literature.  One night in 2007, after I finished reading Sam Harris's book, Letter to a Christian Nation, I went to bed.  I was awakened an hour later by visitors I could not see.  I knew two things, they hated me absolutely and wanted to hurt me physically. 

I also knew I had to be very cautious on what I did next.  I had read enough of the Bible, heard enough from preachers and had read enough supplemental material (in particular, Watchman Nee), to know that anything I did, that was based solely on my own power, would be a major error.  

I recalled strategies such as 'rebuking in the name of Christ' and others, but I was not sure if I would make a mistake with those, so I kept thinking and then got some divine help.

 

 

by digital light they hovered and poured pure hate down over my bed hung the advisors selling sammy’s letter to a christian nation of gods and portals opened when I closed the book and peeked into worlds a hair’s width away from my face they pressed hard for another mistake doubt stabbed my recall of passages and preachers in this kind of fight would they not give chase fear stumbles a femur snaps to put me back down reduced my weapons to decorative clutter in that old farmhouse The Holy Ghost spoke told me not to engage them extended his hands slowly closed my eyes blurred vision of Christ who stood by his Father’s throne and before any of minute’s measures of time three demons were gone ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Current Contest: Divine Intervention Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke --------------------------------------------- Old Contest: Senryu on Angels Sponsor: Marvin Celestial Written: 04.04.16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/28/2018 8:59:00 AM
Very miraculous and marvelous composition of poetry.
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Date: 6/18/2017 5:53:00 PM
thanks for your congrats to Kash, if he even ever sees it. He's just hard to track down! I came here to tell you because you are such an angel yourself!
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Date: 12/23/2016 1:00:00 PM
Indeed, Rob!!! It's all real! Your poem/poems have reminded me of a higher accountability we are each being held to/called to... and reminders of an earlier calling to holiness; untainted; G-d alone! I really like your gifted works!!! Press-on!! Big Hugggs. Deb
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Rob Carmack
Date: 12/23/2016 11:32:00 PM
Thank you Deb and God Bless you. Hugs.
Date: 9/30/2016 11:15:00 AM
Hey, do you remember me? i was the one that had a featured poem a couple years back, i come to say, great poem, it is really intriguing, regarding my car poem, my chihuahua, Paco, Died this year on august 15th at 0100, and on the 23rd of this month, my uncle's pug, Mack died, this year has not been a good year for me, otherwise, keep doing what you are doing and never stop
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Date: 10/14/2016 11:03:00 PM
I did not remember you until I read the poem. Sorry to read about Paco and Mack. I am glad to see you are back, I am not on PS much now, but should be getting back more next summer. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 6/13/2016 4:13:00 AM
Really intriguing poem, Rob. What an experience!
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Date: 5/16/2016 9:33:00 AM
Congrats on your win, a most interesting piece. Well described
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Date: 5/16/2016 1:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win. The angels ha e helped more than anyone in my life. Long story...but when I call on them their help is instant. I am happy you know of their power. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 5/15/2016 10:04:00 PM
Rob, this is wonderful, best of luck in the contest
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Date: 5/11/2016 3:20:00 PM
Terrific piece here Rob...I can feel the presence in your words
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Date: 5/7/2016 7:04:00 PM
hey, still waiting for your family haiku!!!
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Date: 5/3/2016 12:06:00 PM
Rob, A great write on angels. Congratulations on ur win. Enjoyed............//:) hugs
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Date: 4/24/2016 12:15:00 PM
still waiting for new poetry And did I never say congratulations to you here. You deserved the win.
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Date: 4/16/2016 5:08:00 AM
wow... a seraphic glow shines through your lines, rob!..sweet congrats!..huggs
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Date: 4/16/2016 12:25:00 PM
Thanks with a hug.
Date: 4/12/2016 5:13:00 PM
Congrats on your top win with your unusual story, Rob! Very intriging :)
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Rob Carmack
Date: 4/16/2016 12:26:00 PM
Thank you Laura.
Date: 4/12/2016 3:53:00 PM
A beautiful poem and an amazing way to recount it. Congratulations on placing first, Rob! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 4/16/2016 12:28:00 PM
Thanks Paul.
Date: 4/12/2016 2:05:00 PM
Hi Rob, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. Well Rob, your write pulls the reader in and actually makes one think on their own beliefs as far as Angels go. An excellent write, well deserving of a seven.
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Date: 4/16/2016 12:30:00 PM
Thank you Vladislav for reading and the seven.
Date: 4/12/2016 10:53:00 AM
Such an amazing poem about an amazing event in your life, Rob. Beautiful and inspiring. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win. Sandra
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Date: 4/16/2016 12:30:00 PM
Thank you Sandra.
Date: 4/12/2016 10:39:00 AM
Congrats on your superb win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Rob Carmack
Date: 4/16/2016 12:31:00 PM
Thank you my friend.
Date: 4/12/2016 9:48:00 AM
Rob, your experience is very profound . your faith is your Word, and Saint Michael by his side. Congratulations on your win! :-)
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Date: 4/16/2016 12:32:00 PM
Thank you and God bless you Eve.
Date: 4/12/2016 9:29:00 AM
Congrats on your great win...
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Rob Carmack
Date: 4/16/2016 12:32:00 PM
Thanks Probir.
Date: 4/12/2016 8:14:00 AM
Rob, Beautiful senyru, congrats on your top placement! -luloo :)
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Rob Carmack
Date: 4/16/2016 12:34:00 PM
Thank you very much Laura.
Date: 4/12/2016 7:23:00 AM
Wow, this was powerful. Watchman Nee is in our library as well. Congratulations on your win.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 4/16/2016 12:33:00 PM
Nice to see another who has read Watchman Nee. Thank you for visiting my poem.
Date: 4/12/2016 5:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Rob
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Rob Carmack
Date: 4/16/2016 12:35:00 PM
Thank You Nayda.
Date: 4/12/2016 3:51:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Rob I knew this would place very well for you:-) hugs Jan xx
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Rob Carmack
Date: 4/16/2016 12:35:00 PM
Thank you Jan.
Date: 4/12/2016 1:24:00 AM
Great win Rob, congratulations...well done.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 4/12/2016 2:01:00 AM
Thank you Charlie.
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