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Angel of Mine

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You are mine ~ I am yours ~ in this together Your heart and mine in synchrony they beat Bequeathed One with thoughts that sync mine Enlightened Souls in love ~ a conjoined feat Overwhelmed with the throb of your heartbeat A subtle flutter like a butterfly’s touch within That stirs the very essence of my soul and tickles goose bumps that creep upon my skin In anticipation for your fingers to hold mine Proclaim your entry with your first lusty cry I’ll weep a mother’s tears of soulful joy Soothing you with my own sweet lullaby Till then ~ for now we bond as one to the other An affinity in the unity of a child to its Mother He cradles us in his arms ~ you respond to his touch The completed circle with you ~ me ~ and your father My poem is written to celebrate the coming event for a very special couple who are excitedly expecting their first little girl. Video clip and music by - Colbie Caillat

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/24/2018 8:52:00 AM

Oh my word Maria, You are an artist who clothes her words with magic! Pleased to meet you, Best regards, Jennifer

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/25/2018 2:10:00 AM

Excellent. Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing it.

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/13/2018 11:46:00 AM

Sorry that I have previously missed reading this jewel my dear friend. A stunningly beautiful and truly inspiring creation. Your talent awes me..

Maria Williams
Date: 6/13/2018 10:16:00 PM

Thanks once again Robert. Better late than never as they say. So glad that you liked this my friend....Maria hugs

Charles Messina

Date: 6/1/2018 3:10:00 PM

Very Lovely Maria, a wonderful poem...Congrats to the mother and father of the child...Have a nice weekend...Hugs // Charlie

Maria Williams
Date: 6/6/2018 6:48:00 AM

Thanks so much Charlie, so glad that you liked it. I have just returned from a trip, looking forward to catching up on all your wonderful writes....Maria hugs

Ricky Muse

Date: 5/31/2018 9:33:00 PM

Oh. Lovely. The line "proclaim your entry with your first lusty cry" is nice. Excellent poem.

Maria Williams
Date: 6/6/2018 6:46:00 AM

Thanks so much Richard. So glad that you liked it...Maria :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/27/2018 9:53:00 AM

What a special dedication.

Maria Williams
Date: 6/6/2018 6:45:00 AM

Thank you Richard....Maria hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/26/2018 8:42:00 AM

Hi Maria, Your well written write pulled at the heart strings. It brought tears to my eyes. I am a mother and I exprienced everything you wrote about. I agree with the " Wing Man" there is no greater gift. The couple will love this as do I. Excellent job and straight in to my favs. PS, Nice song choice. It complimented your write very well:-) Alexis

Maria Williams
Date: 5/26/2018 9:18:00 AM

Thanks Alexis, so glad that you liked it. I can see then that you as a mother will know that special feeling that all us women experience. No greater joy than the birth of a baby, I second that completely. Thanks Alexis for the visit and lovely comment....Maria

Carole Duet

Date: 5/26/2018 12:29:00 AM

Oh Maria...this is so touching and so beautiful and I am so happy for you and your daughter. I know you can barely wait for your little "angel" to appear. Being a mother is wonderful and being a grandmother is doubly wonderful. Such a sweet poem to be treasured always.

Yazmin Malik

Date: 5/25/2018 7:02:00 AM

I have no children, but feel it must be a beautiful experience. Your poetic pen has not limits Maria, you write so beautifully <3

Maria Williams
Date: 5/25/2018 7:48:00 AM

It is the most beautiful experience Yazmin, believe me. A friend of mine who is 48, has just given birth to a beautiful baby girl. She felt like she died and went to Heaven, she is so overjoyed, Thanks for your visit and sweet comments. I appreciate it....Maria xxx

Winged Warrior

Date: 5/24/2018 5:49:00 PM

There is no greater gift, joy, and love of the birth, bond, and harmony of Mother and Child...creatively expressed in your superb write my dear friend...give my congrats when appropriate...love and light of birth...^WW^

Maria Williams
Date: 5/25/2018 7:49:00 AM

I so agree WW, no greater joy, a gift from above. Thanks for the visit and lovely comment my dear friend. Love and Light always....Maria hugs

Silent One

Date: 5/23/2018 9:08:00 AM

I can remember my wife was expecting our first child, I was so excited and full of joy.. I am glad that I am not a woman and do not have to go trough labour! Great poem Maria..

Maria Williams
Date: 5/24/2018 6:57:00 AM

They say that if a woman could remember her pain during labor, then she would never have another baby. Guess they are right. Thanks for visit and comment Si, appreciate it my friend. Good to see you back....Maria

Judith S

Date: 5/23/2018 8:53:00 AM

How beautifully moving my sweet friend Maria! This drew a tear as it brought me back to such a special time in my life. Full of amazement and wonder as this little person grew within me. The feeling of movement ... the tears when you'd hear the heartbeat ... the abolute, pure love you feel for this growing baby. A very sweet gift you've created for the new parents :) ~ Judy

Maria Williams
Date: 5/24/2018 7:01:00 AM

Thanks Judy, it was an easy one to write, as you say its the feelings that we women who have given birth will always fondly remember. Thanks for the visit and beautiful comment my friend, truly appreciate it....Maria xxx

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 5/23/2018 6:47:00 AM

Such a lovely poem this is, the love of a mother to her unborn child, according to my mother there isn t any geeling better than knowing that we are giving birth to a new human and an unusual bond is made between the mother and child, an unconditional love because of which the mother never hesitate to sacrifice anything, even if it s her own life, many congratulations to the couple who s expecting their first new born, you have given a great tribute to them. Good luck

Maria Williams
Date: 5/24/2018 7:03:00 AM

How astute you are my dear young friend, your Mother said it so well. Thanks for the visit and lovely comment Faraz, I truly appreciate it....Maria :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/22/2018 4:26:00 PM

'Angel of Mine', indeed! Dear Maria, your exquisite, tender and loving poem brought tears to my eyes, my sweet friend. A moving poem that only a mother who has experienced this miracle could write. My heart is bursting with emotion after reading - no, feeling - your magnificent write. Absolutely breathtaking and a fav! A commemoration to be treasured. Warmest wishes and love my inspired friend.. ~Susan

Maria Williams
Date: 5/24/2018 7:07:00 AM

How lovely to see you my dear friend Susan. How true your words are, how aptly you convey those feelings. Feelings that will always stay with us mothers. Will be sending you an Email tomorrow, with some photos. I appreciate your visit and lovely comments always my dear....Maria xxx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/22/2018 12:56:00 PM

How caring and sweet! You wrote a lovely gift for your friends, that they will cherish forever. Your video complements the sentiments in your heart..great work, Maria.

Maria Williams
Date: 5/25/2018 7:52:00 AM

Thanks so much Vijay my dear friend. always appreciate your lovely visits and sincere comments ....Maria hugs

Pashang Salehi

Date: 5/22/2018 12:20:00 PM

Indeed a complete circle...I'm waiting eagerly, hopefully, I'll see that day...

Maria Williams
Date: 5/25/2018 7:54:00 AM

Thanks so much Pashang my dear friend.I believe you will, always appreciate your lovely visits and comments....Maria hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/22/2018 10:30:00 AM

Us men no matter how sensitive and caring we may be, we will never feel the agony, the joy, ecstasy of the coming of a baby! The ancient Spartans, the fiercest warriors of all, used to say " Better death to face thrice on a battlefield with sword in hand that a child birth!" Well, my ladies you are bravest than the Spartans and for that you deserve my admiration and that of all men! A divine poem, so tender, so loving and so true! May the little angel come healthy and be happy!Glorious poem!

Maria Williams
Date: 5/25/2018 7:59:00 AM

I do believe this is the best comment that I have received from anyone. Thank you my dearest friend, now I know us women have the respect of the Spartans, the fiercest warriors. On behalf of all women who have given birth, I thank you....Maria xxx

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/22/2018 9:10:00 AM

So sweet of you to write this wonderful poem for a friend, Maria. Nicely penned:)

Maria Williams
Date: 5/25/2018 8:01:00 AM

Thanks so much Daniel.I always appreciate your lovely visits and comments....Maria hugs

Martin Williams

Date: 5/22/2018 9:03:00 AM

Superb!! love these small poems..you capture the theme so intensely

Maria Williams
Date: 5/25/2018 8:02:00 AM

Thanks so much Martin.I always appreciate your lovely visits and comments....Maria hugs

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 5/22/2018 8:59:00 AM

Only souls whose hearts are dripping with genuine unconditional love could portray a generous write of infinite love and longing for the coming angel.. "Angel of Mine', that's for sure! It is yours because dear Maria you are a mother who has gone through the conception of an angel in her womb.. a brilliant rendition of what happens inside a woman's womb and how she feels! Full of love, generosity and beauty! Shine wherever you set on your pen. Stay blessed always dear Maria.

Maria Williams
Date: 5/25/2018 8:04:00 AM

You know what I do so love about your comments? You express exactly what I have tried to. Thank you my dear friend for your profound and sincere comments. I always appreciate them....Maria Hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/22/2018 8:55:00 AM

What a beautiful tribute you've written with accompanying music Maria. They will love it for sure. Best wishes to the parents to be. Tom

Maria Williams
Date: 5/25/2018 8:05:00 AM

Thanks so much Tom.I always appreciate your lovely visits and comments....Maria hugs