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The ancient fabulist Aesop created the story "The Hare and the Tortoise." It has been retold in

different forms throughout the centuries.

 

 

"Races aren't for turtles, yo-yo!" scoffed the rabbit to his rival. Though I veer off-course, I'll win this. Speed, for runners, means survival! "Never underestimate me," said the turtle to the rabbit. "Faster, faster is your mantra. Slow and watchful is my habit." ****************** Now the trophy's been presented. Turtle's proud to be the winner. Rabbit's lost out in the brambles. Turtle's going home for dinner. March 20, 2023 Contest: A Simple Poetry Contest Sponsor: John Lawless

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Date: 4/5/2023 12:32:00 PM
how CUTE. Big congrats. I think this is my number one!!!
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Date: 3/31/2023 11:46:00 AM
Wonderful re-telling in rhyme and humor of this familiar fable of wisdom, Janice. Congratulations on your win. Perfect distillation of this revered fable! Blessings!
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Date: 3/30/2023 5:28:00 PM
Cute and sweet Janice. Love your take on the race. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/31/2023 6:52:00 AM
Thanks so much, Linda. Janice
Date: 3/30/2023 1:08:00 PM
Great meter and cadence had me hopping and hoping I hadn't slept too long....Thanks for entering the contest
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/30/2023 4:10:00 PM
John, thanks so much for sponsoring and for my placement! Janice
Date: 3/22/2023 7:11:00 AM
Nice one Janice, good rhyme and flow with nice imagery too. Blessings,Gordon
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/25/2023 7:29:00 AM
Thanks so much, Gordon. Janice
Date: 3/22/2023 5:11:00 AM
As they say slow and steady wins the race and cheaters never win. This one left me smiling, Janice. Good luck!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/25/2023 7:29:00 AM
Thanks so much, Danny! Janice

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