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For me, there is nothing as beautiful as the sea on a windy day. I watched this scene for a long time from the beach at Greatstone, Kent. It is a wild scene with stretches of shingle and very few people.

Bright sun and blue skies spread high above a green sea ever rising to the high tide and the clouds came over covering the sun. The wind freshened, throwing the sea against the rocks in pale plumes of spray springing from white, foam-topped waves. Pushing inshore from the South-West, the green sea grew pewter grey as the clouds stalked across the blue sky.

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Date: 10/2/2014 5:02:00 PM
Elisabeth, a quite beautiful write here. Your words capture and reflect the images your portray quite well. One can visualize the sea. Enjoyed it very much!! It's a "7" for me. Cheers, Gary
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Gary Bateman
Date: 10/3/2014 3:25:00 PM
Elisabeth . . . I know that I enjoy this type of setting too -- especially when the beach is deserted and you can truly enjoy all the beauty and solitude. Cheers, Gary
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Elisabeth Sheaffer
Date: 10/3/2014 3:18:00 AM
Thank you Gary. So nice to hear from you. Watching the sea, especially from a deserted piece of beach, is top of my list of favourite activities.

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