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An April Sonnet

I’ve gone outside to sit nearby my tree, which bloomed this April, and on the first day! With pen in hand (the good old-fashioned way) I pause – to let impressions come to me. More than a blushing willow do I see. The thing most striking is that winter’s grey has vanished! In its place, a vast array of nature’s jade gives spring green majesty! The dingy cloak of winter now is gone. My eyes adore the jewelry of spring - the leaves and grass of emerald and on my pretty tree, in sunlight glittering - those rose quartz gems! Right now above my lawn, from beaded boughs, a bird begins to sing! April 8, 2018 For Brian Strand's 'LATE APRIL 2018 PREMIERE CONTEST,ANY FORM OR NONE,ANY THEME,UPTO A MAX OF 20 lines' Poetry Contest

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Date: 4/24/2018 7:33:00 AM
Lovely spring sonnet, Andrea. I can see the scene. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/22/2018 2:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed it. Could picture it.
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Date: 4/22/2018 10:45:00 AM
Congrats, Andrea. A most deserved win with this lovely sonnet. Congrats!!
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Date: 4/22/2018 10:35:00 AM
Such a lovely Italian Sonnet, Andrea, which paints so well your welcoming of Spring. So glad to see your poem on this winner's list after reading below! Congratulations! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/22/2018 7:13:00 AM
Excellent, Andrea! CONGRATS! Janice
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Date: 4/19/2018 9:58:00 AM
Just dropping by Andrea. I truly enjoyed your sonnet but the rhyme scheme was totally off in the sestet so...My bad, because I realized later there was another which had issues with that as well which slipped through---but you should know better, cuz you are usually a perfectionist..
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/20/2018 6:26:00 PM
I am going to fix that one line, Craig. Thanks for that.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/20/2018 6:10:00 PM
so sorry, Craig. I never said I should have won. I just didn't appreciate being told my sestet was wrong. You are right. That one line 8 is my bad, and I do not know how I let that get past me. As for being a perfectionist, I find it gets harder to be one the older I get.
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Craig Cornish
Date: 4/20/2018 7:06:00 AM
First, read the rules which are more important and secondly to add insult to injury, your octave is also incorrect since you wrote abba abbb. tree day way me -- see gray away stay.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/19/2018 6:11:00 PM
It is you who are wrong. I took this from one of several sites which define it:a sonnet form associated with the poet Petrarch, having an octave rhyming a b b a a b b a and a sestet rhyming either c d e c d e or c d c d c d Also called Italian sonnet (Mine is cdcdcd at the end) Thanks a lot, Craig. Like my week isn't bad enough already. I don't need to hear how I "should know better."
Date: 4/10/2018 4:45:00 PM
Lovely, Andrea. There is hope for us all. Love your lines "The dingy cloak of winter now is gone. My eyes adore the jewelry of spring". Beautiful.
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Date: 4/9/2018 8:46:00 PM
In a couple of days we shall finally get some spring weather in New York. I like this tribute to the season and its joys. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 4/9/2018 7:48:00 PM
Wow Andrea, let us sing of spring! I love how you have spring colors portrayed as gems. "My eyes adore the jewelry of spring". An original line that shines as most of your poetry always does. I loved this spring sonnet Andrea, which is sure to place high! : )
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/20/2018 12:49:00 AM
It got nothing, Connie. But I am glad you liked it.
Date: 4/9/2018 6:28:00 PM
The jewelry of spring Oh my! Aren't we the super poetress. I can't write like that. About the contest they are not all fair.
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Date: 4/9/2018 11:21:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Andrea! I bet Craig will work out that this entry is yours...it's got your trademark enjambment to give you away! Regards // paul
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Date: 4/9/2018 7:19:00 AM
An enchanting poem Andrea..enjoyed reading every word adorning beautiful imagery. Excellent..a must win!
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Date: 4/9/2018 3:58:00 AM
Lovely imagery Andrea, winters grey cloak gives way to the arrival if spring. Tom. Good luck.
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Date: 4/9/2018 12:57:00 AM
The jewelry of spring; that's exactly right. What a lovely Italian Sonnet-creator you are, I mean really!
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Date: 4/8/2018 10:48:00 PM
Sounds likes a lovely experience! I thought spring was here but it snowed again today. Beautiful poem, Andrea!
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Date: 4/8/2018 8:50:00 PM
Yes I do believe spring is finally here to stay, though we did have another cold snap here in Texas this weekend. Best of luck in the contest, Andrea.
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Date: 4/8/2018 6:48:00 PM
Inside is where I decided to remain; Looked out and saw weather vane; Beautiful butterflies, Before my eyes; On page in book picture of a crane. Jim Horn I would rather have someone write a poem for me that just make a comment. That is more meaningful.
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