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Amongst the Silence

Stretched out amongst the silence not understanding page upon page ink spots splattered more than meaning holding on to words feelings evoked deep inside my tomb shunned to die within the darkness begging to see the light filter out another day write for me my release a detailed death reprieve scripted in holograph marking the right path so I can live in peace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/13/2018 2:42:00 AM
Wow, Tim Tam Man! A very moving piece you have delivered! You never disappoint! Excellent
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Date: 6/12/2018 9:19:00 PM
Very moving and thought provoking...best wishes,Tim.
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Date: 6/11/2018 7:04:00 PM
Well written Tim. Lovely ending :)
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Date: 6/11/2018 4:44:00 PM
Lots of depth on this one Tim...
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Date: 6/11/2018 1:52:00 PM
- Deeply sensitive, Tim - big hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/11/2018 12:24:00 PM
Nicely done my friend...enjoy your peace Timmy...love & light...^WW^
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