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American Scream

american scream life without security the dream is now lost

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/21/2012 9:14:00 PM

Terry,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 7/1/2012 6:38:00 PM

We elect lawyers and politicians. It's like buying a fox to keep an eye on the chickens. The dream needs to be taken back.

Terry L. Allen
Date: 7/3/2012 11:02:00 AM

You are so right as we have become insurance, lawyer and government poor. Their hand is in our pocket more than our's is. Love and Peace TLee

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/15/2012 3:18:00 PM

you are so right Terry, interesting Senryu this, like this one. harry

Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/15/2012 5:41:00 PM

I guess It got the point across and that was my aim. I am so glad Arry that you stopped by and like my poem. Ave a blessed day. Huggs TLee

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 5/13/2012 11:42:00 AM

Superb write,powerful words darling....

Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/13/2012 4:58:00 PM

America is scared and frazzeled right now except for the rich. The rich have been systematically selling us out for years and years not to mention using us for pay they wouldn't even get out of bed for. Now because we want them to pay back we are lazy louts who want freebees. Thanks for your suportive review Huggs TLee

Terry O'Leary

Date: 5/12/2012 1:21:00 PM

Senryu, Haiku... OMG... I'm getting lost... but I love the poem... ;-)) Terry

Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/12/2012 6:42:00 PM

Hey I can't do a review for you as I have reviewed everything you have posted. Hey Irishman put some blarney down on paper as I know you can but oh what beautiful blarney.

Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/12/2012 6:38:00 PM

A Hiaku I was always told before is supposed to deal with only nature but I guess the rules there have changed. A Senryu deals with any other subject. But as I said they keep changing the rules so your guess is as good as mine. Huggs hon TLee

Kash Poet

Date: 5/12/2012 10:59:00 AM

An interesting senryu by you Terry.Enjoyed the read.

Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/12/2012 6:45:00 PM

It's probably not kosher but with the economy and the job situation here not to mention the political unrest I felt it was what I wanted to say. Thanks for the review and being a friend. Huggs TLee