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Amazement

The rains came today washing down an acrid mist hours upon hours of descension as if sun would had never exist barren, he laid half naked under guise of her watchful eyes in amazement he stared at her attention climbing high atop his throbbing soul engorged by the surge of her beauty and her desire to take all control soft words were spoken aloft stroking his very being sensed in theme of inversion and sudden urge to be free conjoined momements gratified wonder euphoric exhilaration overcame blues brightened, greys drifted away melancholy migrated and felicity stayed

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Date: 6/24/2018 12:24:00 AM
Tim, your title is the perfect adjatiave to discribe this write.. Amazement (Amazing). You are one of the true Master Poets here!
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/24/2018 4:38:00 AM
Thank you Dave
Date: 6/23/2018 5:02:00 PM
AFTERGLOW! I think I remember. lol Masterfully written, Tim:)
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/24/2018 4:37:00 AM
Thank you my friend...good luck to the razorbacks in the CWS
Date: 6/23/2018 7:14:00 AM
Yep ! and that's how the birds and bee's do it.... well done my friend.
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/24/2018 4:36:00 AM
Thanks JT

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