Alone

wooed by the comfort of others and worldly things ideals stall change they visit but never stay leaving us tired and alone ------------------------------------------ Contest: One New Tanka Sponsor: Rick Parise 03.09.15

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Fj Thomas

Date: 1/18/2021 10:50:00 AM

Ideals always have. Good one Rob!

Poesy Relish

Date: 12/23/2015 11:42:00 AM

well penned... this poems shows how few words can speak a lot ... nad

Neelamani Sutar

Date: 11/24/2015 12:27:00 PM

awesome!

Punnia Viswan Bhatia

Date: 11/11/2015 4:38:00 AM

wonderfully penned...

Sarita Milliner

Date: 11/10/2015 3:17:00 PM

Good read!! Your poetry leaves me wanting more!

Julia Ward

Date: 4/12/2015 3:23:00 PM

A philosophical tanka. Well done, Rob! Julia, :)

John Matthews

Date: 4/9/2015 10:06:00 AM

thanks for the placing in your contest and I like this poem a lot john matthews

Constance La France

Date: 3/31/2015 1:04:00 PM

Rob, and excellent tanka poem for the contest, well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, thinking in. . .

Rob Carmack

Date: 3/30/2015 10:44:00 AM

I want to thank all of you that took the time to read and comment. I appreciate it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2015 10:47:00 PM

I see you got a lot of great comments despite me not placing this one. the idea behind it is excellent!

Rob Carmack
Date: 3/30/2015 10:42:00 AM

TY Andrea. Hey, I have another excellent idea. How about this; the great people below could be your advisors in your future contests? :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/28/2015 3:12:00 PM

Excellent Tanka, few can execute them this well.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/15/2015 3:16:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one today..Well thought out idea..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..Sara

Viv Wigley

Date: 3/9/2015 10:00:00 AM

Lines three and four, particularly- terrific. What a great piece. Good luck in the comp. Mister Viv. Oh, and a #7 from me.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/9/2015 1:25:00 AM

A wonderful entry for Andrea's contest Rob. I hope to see this on her winner's list.