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Almost Baking a Cake

"recently scenes of early life have stolen into my mind, like breezes blown ..." Quote by _Samuel Taylor Coleridge (from his writings)
I remember, I was a little more than two -- To my auntie’s house visiting Mom would take The year was sometime around 1942. While they talked, I decided to bake a cake I pilfered through Auntie’s cabinets and found Ingredients for the sweet I was about to make. Flour, soda, sugar – this and that -- I took down For liquid (I couldn’t read) machine oil I used All mixed together in a bowl, this tidy mound. Suffice it to say, I was, by this time, so confused When Mom and Auntie discovered my career, I had proper ingredients with machine oil infused. With some brisk words and a sharp slap on the rear My baking career came to an abrupt, unhappy ending Toward home we went, me shedding many a tear. My whole life Auntie loved the story of my blending With machine oil the ingredients for baking a cake And I spent a lifetime of embarrassment defending What kitchen concoctions precocious kids can make!
SECOND PLACE WINNER
Written October 1, 2022 [a memory in terza rima] Submitted to "Past Memories - T Forms" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France

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Date: 11/12/2022 1:05:00 AM
Milt, a fun Terza Rima, and congratulations on your placement in my contest, Writing Challenge - Past Memories- "T" Forms, and of course I like the quote, well done !
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/12/2022 8:56:00 AM
Thank you so much for your contests, Constance, and particularly for my placement. I enjoyed writing for it.
Date: 11/1/2022 11:16:00 AM
Congratulations Milton! I wish I knew you were coming; I'd have baked you a cake! They used to bake something when expecting company to make the house smell like baked goodies! :)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/1/2022 11:58:00 AM
Thanks, Anaya. I always wondered where that saying came from.
Date: 11/1/2022 7:05:00 AM
Great childhood experience very beautifully narrated in Terza Rima form. Congratulations!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/1/2022 8:59:00 AM
Thank you so much, Chris.
Date: 10/4/2022 9:20:00 AM
"With some brisk words and a sharp slap on the rear My baking career came to an abrupt, unhappy ending Toward home we went, me shedding many a tear" - you were ostracized for trying to bake them a cake! So sad!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/4/2022 11:07:00 AM
I think I was punished for "meddling," in Auntie's kitchen cabinets, Caren, as well as I remember (and I don't).
Date: 10/3/2022 8:14:00 AM
Milt, I love every line of your Terza Rima. Cooking can be such fun. If this doesn't make the winning list, I'll be surprised and disappointed.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/3/2022 8:17:00 AM
Aw, thanks, Jenna. This is a true story, and it followed me my whole life!~
Date: 10/2/2022 2:15:00 PM
Milton this was a joy to read. Put a smile on my face. I guess the message was you wanted cake and they should have gone and bought you one lol. That would have been the perfect ending. lol. Sorry for the turn of events...
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/3/2022 8:17:00 AM
Well, it made for a good laugh every time there was a family gathering.
Date: 10/1/2022 1:14:00 PM
don't know if this is true, milton, but it's a great story and you've told it in a very entertaining way...
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/1/2022 2:09:00 PM
Yep, Ilene. It's true, except that I didn't get a spank on the rear-end. Both my aunt and my mother admitted they had not been watching me carefully enough, so engaged in their conversation. Actually, during my preparations, I fell off a stool from fetching another ingredient from the top cabinet. By the time they corralled me, however, the damage was done.
Date: 10/1/2022 11:12:00 AM
it is a career as a confectioner that was aborted... but we gained an excellent poet, I would say...
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/1/2022 11:21:00 AM
Aw, you are too kind to this ol' man, Marco. Nice to see you again. Looking forward to a new poem from you!

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