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All That I ... Authored by Chuck Keys Looking to and fro side to side it wasnt in sight it had no scent it had no dimensions nor phsyicality nor identity yet just for a brief second I felt its cool breeze pass by it contrasted sharply from the bright hot silent lazy late afternoon sun the sweat on my brow made my skin tingle just ever so slight just a brief tiny muscle twitch or 2 there was no warning no hint of what was coming or going only a wee afterthought. Sssshhh nothing is moving not even a fly neither ant nor gnat waiting patiently for a movement something must move but when why was there so much blankness yet existence sssshhh maybe just maybe it will come back is it time must it be now aaaahhhaaa eureka I remember I think I know it was my time to thank God again for all that I ...

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Date: 11/22/2010 12:07:00 PM
Many congrats on your feature this week Rgds Janette
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Date: 11/22/2010 11:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Chuck. Love,Carol
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Date: 11/21/2010 5:20:00 PM
Congrats Chuck on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great choice to share with us all .. have a very Happy Thanksgiving luv..
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Date: 9/20/2010 9:26:00 AM
great write on how often we forget! Loved the ending, thanks so much for your nice comment if you have time give me a comment on my blog too? Light & Love
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Date: 6/11/2010 9:45:00 AM
Very brilliant for a minute their, i thought you where not feeling the masses of life. Losing all the energy to the constant speed accelerating the change straight ahead. Glad you got to meet who you you really are in the presence of God. Lovely poem, enjoyed the insights of the view of your dimension having no walls... full of air, and the stare ahead. Glad to read this one, have a wonderful day,..p.d.
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Date: 5/18/2010 1:38:00 PM
Great drawing write that captivated my attention and held it...We all do forget to thank God for all don't we..Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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Date: 5/3/2010 2:23:00 PM
Wow, this poem moves in such an intriguing way, Chuck. It was gripping! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/30/2010 5:09:00 AM
Well written, Chuck and thank you for your comment! Hope youl'll have a nice weekend...Gert
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Date: 4/27/2010 10:27:00 AM
is this for the leave me hanging contest--it is a good one.
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