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All That Constitutes a Receptive Mind

Grey dawn was retreating from my Front gate. I looked upon its obvious distress; And, slinking away as the new day Breaks... Its all too apparent old weariness. What strange compunction pulls on Us to pause At the sudden insistence of a whim? This, which, seemingly, without any Cause, Rising upwards from very deep within; Would I have tarried but too long a While I feared I might undo the fragile spell... But in that brief moment was Reconciled -- With childlike innocence where Wonder dwells! And God forbid that time should Undermine... All that constitutes a receptive Mind.

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Date: 4/11/2020 10:46:00 AM
A very powerful and pensive verse my friend...hope you are keeping safe...best wishes & Happy Easter...from the Wingster :o)
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Date: 3/30/2020 2:00:00 AM
Your writing has had a pensive feeling to it lately John. I hope this Covid-19 is not too much of a burden my friend. I long to shop again and miss it so that I actually enjoyed shopping for food we needed. It felt good to get out of the house. xxoo
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