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Misty shadowed hosts ghastly wisps of fortunes past moonlight from the dead... Halloween Senryu Contest Sponsored by Laura Loo 10/10/2017

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/26/2018 8:55:00 PM

Chilling...I love it. Belated congratulations.

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/29/2018 10:53:00 AM

Thanks M.L.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 10/26/2017 7:14:00 AM

I love this, Charlie! Congrats!

Charlie Smith
Date: 10/26/2017 10:29:00 AM

Thanks Agnes...

Paul Callus

Date: 10/24/2017 2:27:00 PM

An eerie ghostly image which aptly compliments the provided picture, Charlie. Congrats on your fine win. Regards // paul

Charlie Smith
Date: 10/25/2017 8:14:00 AM

Thank you Paul...

James Inman

Date: 10/24/2017 7:23:00 AM

Very descriptive write Charlie.

Charlie Smith
Date: 10/24/2017 10:19:00 AM

Thanks James.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/24/2017 7:13:00 AM

Excellent, Charlie! Congrats! <3 Kim

Charlie Smith
Date: 10/24/2017 10:18:00 AM

Thanks Kim...

Lu Loo

Date: 10/24/2017 5:33:00 AM

love that second line, very creepy senryu dear Charlie :) thank you and congrats :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 10/24/2017 10:18:00 AM

Thank you so much LuLoo...

Moon Flower

Date: 10/23/2017 8:16:00 PM

One of the cutest Halloween write I've read today. Congrats!

Charlie Smith
Date: 10/24/2017 10:17:00 AM

Thank you Moon Flower.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/23/2017 3:28:00 PM

Congrats to you. I am happy to see this one on the list.

Charlie Smith
Date: 10/23/2017 3:35:00 PM

Thank you Andrea.

Roy Pett

Date: 10/23/2017 1:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Charlie, great Senryu. :))

Charlie Smith
Date: 10/23/2017 3:33:00 PM

Thank you Roy.

Gary Smith

Date: 10/23/2017 11:22:00 AM

A spookily lovely poem Charlie, congrats :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 10/23/2017 3:32:00 PM

Thank you Gary.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/23/2017 7:22:00 AM

Back with congrats :) xomo!

Charlie Smith
Date: 10/23/2017 11:06:00 AM

Thanks Maureen...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/17/2017 3:28:00 PM

Oh, Charlie, you and I think alike. I also used mist and wisp in my senryu!! GREAT job! I like how you did it as "ghastly wisps"

Charlie Smith
Date: 10/17/2017 7:35:00 PM

Thank you Andrea...

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/17/2017 12:42:00 PM

Cool poem, Charlie. I love Halloween time ... still have a diabetic sweet tooth for it's youthful exuberance. Kids are so happy this time of the year, especially w/Christmas coming around the corner. Sweet senryu. Love and peace, bro.

Charlie Smith
Date: 10/17/2017 7:36:00 PM

Peace be with you my friend....

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/10/2017 9:22:00 PM

Spooky!!!! :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 10/10/2017 10:51:00 PM

Thank you for the visit Arthur...

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/10/2017 7:33:00 PM

An awesome and ingenious senryu Charlie. Fantastic content and imagery. Good luck in the contest!

Charlie Smith
Date: 10/10/2017 10:49:00 PM

Thank you Susan...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/10/2017 4:19:00 PM

Each line well crafted--the theme comes well together--best for a win, Charlie!

Charlie Smith
Date: 10/10/2017 10:48:00 PM

Thank you Vijay....

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/10/2017 3:07:00 PM

- Scary ... (but also a little exciting :) - Best wishes in the contest, Charlie - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 10/10/2017 10:47:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise...

Jan Allison

Date: 10/10/2017 1:25:00 PM

great imagery Charlie:-) good luck:-) hugs jan xx

Charlie Smith
Date: 10/10/2017 10:45:00 PM

Thank you Jan...

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/10/2017 12:56:00 PM

Nicely penned! :) my best to you for the contest Charlie xomo

Charlie Smith
Date: 10/10/2017 10:45:00 PM

Thank you Maureen...