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Note: The Constanza was created by  Connie Marcum Wong. In this form, the first line of each stanza will form the rhyming 
lines of the small poem beneath the larger one, so it's two poems in one! 
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September’s autumn time is small, for at the Equinox, the sun still warms the face when fall’s begun. October holds us each in thrall. . . to beauty - leaves turned gold from green - and scary fun of Halloween! November’s sky becomes a pall. But all that gloom cannot compete With time of thanks and much to eat! Then comes December’s joyous call - The carolers, the jingling sound Of sleigh bells over snowy ground. The Yuletide thus concludes it all - a happy note to end it on, for Christmas comes and fall is gone! September’s autumn time is small; October holds us each in thrall. . . November’s sky becomes a pall. Then comes December’s joyous call - The Yuletide thus concludes it all. For Joseph May's ' Constanza - Old Or New Poems ' Contest From 11/12/2010 (an introductory stanza here had to be omitted for now because of the 5-stanza rule)

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Date: 9/6/2020 7:48:00 AM
A seasonal trea Andrea, Congrats on your win
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Date: 9/6/2020 12:27:00 AM
I am happy to see this seasonal beauty in first place Andrea. I love it and am Faving it! Congratulations! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 9/8/2020 5:44:00 PM
thanks so much, Connie.
Date: 9/5/2020 9:10:00 PM
Such a wonderful journey through fall in the rowboat of a Constanza poem. Truly delightful, and well earned congratulations for your #1!
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Date: 2/24/2014 11:48:00 PM
This is so wonderful Andrea. I can't believe I missed it when this was posted, but then again I was really busy during this time and had little time for poetry. Thank you so much for writing such a lovely Constanza. Love, Connie
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Date: 11/22/2010 9:33:00 AM
like this poem very much :)
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Date: 11/20/2010 10:27:00 AM
WOW this is a fantastic write. You know the nature lover in me and I love the monthly changes you have penned. Will add to my fav. Luv Phyl
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Date: 11/15/2010 1:16:00 PM
Andrea, this is a very lovely write from start to finish, your imagery provides the reader with such a marvelous view of the season's change. (Great form) I thank you for sharing the read and for your wonderful comments :-) One Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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Date: 11/15/2010 8:05:00 AM
This is so cool of you to write a poem in Connie's form ^_^ I think I have to try writing in this form soon (& I love how she named this form too!) How nice that you bring the reader from September to December in this manner & the last stanza just works so well at the end- this sure must be a challenge to write and I think you did a great job with it :) hugs to you-- nikko :)
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Date: 11/14/2010 8:58:00 AM
Hi Andrea, what a great and nice accomplishment with these verses. Great job and thank your for your ongoing kind comments. I had some blood cirulation problems recently butfeeling much better now. Have a great week ahead!...Love, Gert
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Date: 11/13/2010 10:36:00 PM
This is fantastic! It has great meter, I didn't stumble over it at all. I may try my hand at writing one like it as I have a piece I'm working on that would work as the small poem at the end! If I do it, I'll let you know... thank you for such a great read!
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Date: 11/13/2010 4:31:00 PM
Very creative and original, Andrea, your friend is great! Thanks for your comments and all the best in your writes. Joy (Jew)
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Date: 11/13/2010 12:26:00 PM
wonderfull write really took me along with it, Andrea
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Date: 11/13/2010 7:09:00 AM
I like this form. I'm digging out my overcoat. YOu have sent a warm, wonderful chill through my body. The progression is soothing. Thank heavens for Thanksgiving and Christmas, otherwise oncoming winter would be unbearable. Have a good weekend. Love, Dave
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Date: 11/12/2010 10:37:00 PM
wow miss it Andrea, leaving you comments by me,,,lol,, by the way ***I posted a poem dedication, hope you can spy your name in there. (IT IS IN THERE)Thanks for all your comments always p.d.
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Date: 11/12/2010 9:17:00 PM
Really a lovely form and you did it so well. I would love to try it. Thank you for your comments on my so called ode. He said we could write it in any style. Just picka poet. Maybe Connie and this would be a lovely form to write it in.. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/12/2010 8:50:00 PM
Andrea, this is an enchanting form that Connie has created and you words flow so well. Enjoyed it this morning - love Wilma
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Date: 11/12/2010 5:58:00 PM
Lovely form Andrea.... Connie has hit on something here luv.. and u used it so well in your write here.. elegant lines of expression Andrea.. enjoyed very much ..happy weekend my friend..with lots of luv..
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Date: 11/12/2010 5:35:00 PM
enjoyed will have to study a little more.
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Date: 11/12/2010 10:32:00 AM
Nice, work here love it. About the Ghost and its travel, I find the question relevant. I love the wonders of the spirits and its search for need. Take care, ( Lin~Ra )
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Date: 11/12/2010 10:29:00 AM
A nice innovative form with nice rhyming, Andrea, Good luck
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Date: 11/12/2010 9:32:00 AM
Very cool form Connie invented, Andrea, and you work very well in it. I especially enjoyed the monorhyme in the last verse. Enjoyed the way you moved from month to month until you reached Christmas! A delight to read. Love, Carolyn (Clever name for the form -- made me think of the Seinfeld episode where George's former teacher keeps calling him "canstanzia" instead of Costanza.)
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