Aim To Prevail

AIM to PREVAIL Soar like the eagle, swim like a whale. Stand strong as "The Liberty": aim to prevail! _______________________________________________________ 12:23 pm, November 24, 2015

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Funom Makama

Date: 12/17/2015 4:08:00 AM

lines with curves of wisdom and landscapes of awe! My mind is in a park of joy to how I manage selecting this page. Keep on writing dear poet and as always, a wonderful 7 without a doubt!

James Fraser

Date: 11/27/2015 3:59:00 PM

Speaks volumes does this wise and clever short piece. Belated congrats little one, hugs // James xx~xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/26/2015 6:03:00 PM

Positive and confident! Congrats on your win, Olive! Love, Kim

Michael Tor

Date: 11/26/2015 5:38:00 AM

Nice win Olive! Congratulations!

Skat A

Date: 11/24/2015 6:06:00 PM

Olive, Congratulations on your awesome and sweet Epigram couplet win. Have yourself a wonderful, blessed Thanksgiving Day. Love SKAT

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 11/24/2015 5:23:00 PM

Congratulations Olive

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/24/2015 5:10:00 PM

Words to stand by Olive. Excellent! Congratulations on your win!

Paul Callus

Date: 11/24/2015 12:07:00 PM

Congratulations Olive_eloi!! ...you too soar like an eagle with this merited win:) Hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/25/2015 6:40:00 AM

thanks much PAul, I just entered i think near the deadline... :D! hehehe~ Olive Eloisa

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/24/2015 9:28:00 AM

Interesting you mention the whale, with Moby Dick coming to theaters soon! well, I am trying to catch up with oodles of comments and just seeing as many short poems as I can since I gotta leave today on my trip. Glad I saw this one Congrats in the contest.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/24/2015 9:46:00 PM

I didn't hear yet about Moby DIck Andie.. =`) but I just find the whale a friendlier kind of fish than the shark.. =`) hehehe ~Olive Eloisa =`)