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After Forever

Gold no longer blinds the mind from the stars once left behind When time forgets to pass to a love not meant to last Chance just disappears when lies are crystal clear Graves yet put to rest no more shall feel opprest Pain no longer reigns on hopes once left in chains 12/18/2017 After Forever Contest

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Heidi Sands

Date: 3/25/2018 12:31:00 PM

This poem is so good Charlie. I love it :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/11/2018 8:56:00 PM

that is a great poem for what awaits us, Charlie. REally NICE> And congrats. I see it won a contest.

Charlie Smith
Date: 2/12/2018 12:27:00 PM

Thanks Andrea...

Agnes Krampe

Date: 12/25/2017 9:41:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem, Charlie.

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/26/2017 10:13:00 AM

Thank you Agnes...

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/23/2017 2:03:00 PM

Very spiritual poem, Charlie. It breathes w/graceful vitality. Beautiful pen strokes from a master poet! Aurora bright poetry. Love and smiles always.

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/24/2017 7:51:00 AM

Thank you Freddie, Merry Christmas...

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/22/2017 10:23:00 PM

Witty as always. Congrats on your win, Charlie.

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/23/2017 10:13:00 AM

Thank you Line...

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/22/2017 10:09:00 PM

Back with congratulations Charlie & hugs :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/23/2017 10:13:00 AM

Thank you Maureen...

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/22/2017 10:05:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Charlie, with this concise, powerful piece. Janice

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/23/2017 10:13:00 AM

Thank you Janice...

Ram R. V.

Date: 12/22/2017 8:02:00 PM

Pain couched in poetry. Good read. Congrats, Charlie!

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/23/2017 10:12:00 AM

Thank you Ram...

John Lawless

Date: 12/22/2017 6:04:00 PM

This is a wonderful statement of the hope that some pain has an "after" and a new "forever". thanks for participating in the contest Charlie.

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/23/2017 10:12:00 AM

Thanks for the consideration John...

Fj Thomas

Date: 12/20/2017 5:26:00 PM

So sad but beautiful still Charlie :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/23/2017 10:11:00 AM

Thank you Shadow...

Annette Gagliardi

Date: 12/19/2017 9:27:00 PM

Nice addition to the contest. Sounds like you lost someone you loved. If so, I'm sorry for your loss

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/20/2017 11:12:00 AM

Thank you Annette.

Silent One

Date: 12/19/2017 7:35:00 AM

Pain is the only thing that reminds us we are alive.. you did this so well...

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/19/2017 9:58:00 AM

Thank you SO...

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/19/2017 4:00:00 AM

Such a good write, much delivery with brevity. This is good stuff, Charlie, I highly enjoyed it ... CayCay

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/19/2017 9:58:00 AM

Thank you CayCay...

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/18/2017 5:25:00 PM

Hi Charlie, This is a good take on this contest theme. Sometimes it doesn't work out. With that being said should one close their heart to love because they are afraid it won't last? I wish you the best of of in luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/19/2017 9:57:00 AM

Thank you Alexis.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/18/2017 1:23:00 PM

Love this eloquent beautiful pen Charlie, my best to you in the contest :) xomo

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/18/2017 2:52:00 PM

Thanks Maureen....

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/18/2017 1:21:00 PM

Very potent words Charlie--I enjoyed reading your poem--well written..best for a win!

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/18/2017 2:52:00 PM

Thank you Vijay.