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Adult Children: a New Species

They look like us, On the outside, Only just younger. They walk upright, Can speak English; No, not foreigners. We nourish them, Provide for them; Help Them grow stronger. They sprout gadgets, To interface One with another. Prefer online To face to face. Virtual lover? Will they survive, Even evolve, To become human 20160330

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Date: 3/31/2016 7:41:00 PM
wow, that was interesting. LINDA
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 4/1/2016 12:31:00 AM
Inspired by kids that won't move out but bring in others to live with them. Thanks for commenting Linda
Date: 3/31/2016 7:45:00 AM
Oh this made me smile on one hand but sad on the other - I do worry for the younger generation they are losing the art of real face to face communication - it is all 'mobiles and tablets' these days:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/1/2016 12:32:00 AM
Inspired by kids that won't move out but bring in others to live with them. Thanks for commenting Jan
Date: 3/31/2016 12:00:00 AM
Enjoyed reading...
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 4/1/2016 12:33:00 AM
Glad you liked it. It was inspired by kids that won't move out but bring in others to live with them. Thanks for commenting.
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