Adios

The sky is crying My eyes are raining My heart is hurting This love I used to live for is fading Those lips I used to melt for are vanishing But like a fool I’m still waiting for your phantom You whispered your adios hopelessly So why I’m expecting your return hopefully You took your heart and mine Leaving our love in pieces Forgetting that we wrote The beginning of our romance happily Now you closed the last chapter With tears of my stupid ending silently..

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Eric Boddie

Date: 5/19/2017 9:16:00 AM

well what do you know....i Love how your skill just grows....and from the way your words flow....only Beautiful talent shows....i Love it....;)

Pyg's Whisper
Date: 5/19/2017 9:45:00 AM

i'm honored, I wrote it hoping that I could console the broken hearts that still cannot get over their breakups. basically it's a slampoetry project. You can listen to the audio on my SoundCloud and the video on YouTube. i'm looking for your feedback *.*