Acid Rain

sudden rain today sweltering smog disappears stinking chemistry

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Date: 6/10/2016 1:12:00 PM

Your stinking chemistry speaks confused weather nicely. Beautiful haiku my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Karam Misra
Date: 6/10/2016 9:11:00 PM

Thank you, Dev.~karam~

Date: 6/9/2016 12:17:00 AM

I love the first two lines of this one, Karam.

Karam Misra
Date: 6/9/2016 3:44:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. Coming from a master, it makes me happy. ~karam~

Date: 6/8/2016 11:36:00 PM

Karam, thought provoking.. well done 7 ~

Date: 6/8/2016 3:53:00 PM

You captured the after effects of rain very well:-) hugs jan xx

Karam Misra
Date: 6/8/2016 9:15:00 PM

Thank you, Jan.~karam~

Date: 6/8/2016 8:47:00 AM

a weatherlike haiku, heavy words dude - nicely penned.

Karam Misra
Date: 6/8/2016 10:06:00 AM

Thank you, Lenny. Sometimes rain is not so pleasant especially in polluted areas. ~karam~