Abyss

~here the darkest shadows creep seeps, deep into human souls abyss enlarges her mouth receives thy coming In Honor of; Tracie ~*~ Indigo Dream Weaver And Contest: Dodoitsu Darkness

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/25/2011 12:10:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest of Tracie "Dodoitsu Darkness" Moses. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/23/2011 2:30:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/22/2011 5:14:00 PM

Congrats Moses my friend on a super second place win with awesome poetic art...luv...

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/20/2011 6:39:00 AM

Love the atmosphere you create with this write of yours John, wishing you all the best for the contest.. Thank you for your congrats on my placement in the contest ;) God bless Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2011 1:15:00 AM

great mood created in this one, john!

Constance La France

Date: 9/19/2011 3:51:00 PM

This Dodiotsu is very beautiful" seeps deep into human souls" . . John, my compliments and I wish you the best in the contest ~~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/18/2011 7:02:00 PM

Reads like a winner for sure..Enjoyed reading your entry this eve..Thanks for stoppping by, commenting on my humble verse...Thanks again for the honor of winners' circle in your contest..Sara

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/18/2011 6:26:00 PM

Another great take on the picture...thanks for my placement in your contest..it means alot to me...I sure enjoy your writing. BG

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/18/2011 4:01:00 PM

Good luck with your doditsu John. Thank you for going to the trouble of looking up my would be entry and your kind words