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A World of My Own

Could it be? Can it be so? A place for me? Does anyone know? Where can I see? Which way do I go? I could land upside down After falling through a rabbit's hole Zero smiles turn to frowns Everyone in their own control Odd makes the most wonderful sounds Causing greater difference to be their goal. Are there things of all shapes and sizes? Like people, animals, food that makes you taller? Talking flowers and caterpillars in disguises? Mushrooms, bread, cookies that make you smaller? Mad hatters with foolish surprises? Angry queens who never falter? I would explore for all days to come I'd make friends near and far Weird songs with unusual hum Day is night and the sun shines as one big star Always happy, never glum All surroundings quaintly bizarre. Written and posted on September 28th, 2016. By: Michelle Corbin

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Date: 10/13/2016 3:53:00 PM
Love the free associations, Michelle..."Weird songs with unusual hum" very cool....jim
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Michelle Corbin
Date: 10/13/2016 7:32:00 PM
Thank you (: Glad you enjoyed this one!!!
Date: 10/2/2016 12:24:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Your expression is wonderful
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Michelle Corbin
Date: 10/2/2016 5:36:00 AM
Thank you so much! <3
Date: 9/28/2016 11:55:00 AM
Dear Michelle, its rich with inquisitiveness on the part of the writer and for the reader it is like Alice in wonderland! enjoyed this piece, a 7! love, Anu:)
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Michelle Corbin
Date: 9/28/2016 12:07:00 PM
That's exactly what I was going for! Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed this one (:
Date: 9/28/2016 11:12:00 AM
It would be cool to visit. Really enjoyed your poem Michelle
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/2/2016 12:22:00 AM
And the best is Rubina and his his followers have been, well enough said.
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Michelle Corbin
Date: 9/28/2016 11:39:00 AM
Wouldn't it? So glad you liked it!

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