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A Woman's Thoughts

I want to be worth not loosing The friend you won't let down The one person you won't lie to, no matter how bad the truth may hurt I want you to know you hold more, than my heart You hold my future, my dreams, my tears and my smiles I want you to know a look is all it takes to be enough I get scared when I feel insecure, don't get mad, hold me Trusting you is more important than diamonds and gold I want to be worth not taking those daring chances I offer you these things in return without the asking Only then will I give my full heart in return ©Donna Jones

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Pol Anto

Date: 8/13/2013 5:15:00 PM

I love writing that exudes emotion , love and vulnerability. This captures all , I hope someone is holding you tightly x

Donna Jones
Date: 8/14/2013 9:28:00 PM

Thanks for stopping Paul...I hope the same for you....life has its ups and many downs

John Loving Iii

Date: 7/26/2013 12:50:00 PM

i don't usually print other peoples poetry but this i did. because everything you said it was all the same for me. even on trust issues you brought me around. this was a great piece for me personally. it made me feel secure that their was a woman out there like this that i couls make feel this way. i hope you see that with the amount of words i am using that i really liiked this. john

Donna Jones
Date: 7/26/2013 4:36:00 PM

Its so nice to know John....can't tell you how much...can tell you tears were rolling down my cheeks by the time I finished reading this.....that's how much

John Loving Iii
Date: 7/26/2013 12:51:00 PM

added to my favs.

Angel Fire

Date: 4/22/2013 1:46:00 PM

Written from the deep places, very well put. I hope it is recieved there as well. Angel fire

Donna Jones
Date: 4/22/2013 9:22:00 PM

Thanks...I have friends who are in this place...

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 4/20/2013 12:51:00 AM

good thoughts I think most of us share... I hope you have found someone who listens to them :)

Donna Jones
Date: 4/22/2013 9:23:00 PM

Best friends...thanks..for taking the time to stop...:-)

Flit Flit

Date: 4/14/2013 7:27:00 AM

Lovely poem it rings true for men as well thank you

Donna Jones
Date: 4/14/2013 9:01:00 AM

Yes it does!!! Thanks for stopping...Donna

Painted Hunter

Date: 4/10/2013 8:20:00 AM

A woman's thoughts...I just had to see this one! Its great!

Donna Jones
Date: 4/12/2013 9:37:00 PM

You are sweet....thanks....Donna

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 4/8/2013 2:13:00 AM

what a fabulous penned... enjoyed so much your beautiful verses..:) <3 much luv and lights <3 Sk

Donna Jones
Date: 4/12/2013 9:38:00 PM

Very appreciated...thank you...Donna

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/7/2013 11:30:00 AM

Donna; This is beautiful. If only men knew what was in our minds maybe things would be different. Thanks for nsharing..... lucilla

Donna Jones
Date: 4/7/2013 7:25:00 PM

And vise versa I guess....makes the world interesting!!! Thanks for stopping......Donna

David Williams

Date: 4/7/2013 7:36:00 AM

Donna a good write and I like it but what is life without taking chances?..you'll never know until you try...David

Donna Jones
Date: 4/7/2013 11:11:00 AM

Hey David...thanks for stopping...as for a woman who has been married for 36 of her 53 years I do take those chances....just as the title says...just some thoughts I wish I could get through to my hubby of 22 years sometimes ...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/6/2013 10:33:00 PM

I love the poem Donna, but mostly i love the women one can be in and out. and thank you for the comment. you said the right thing, at the right moment. always~ PD

Donna Jones
Date: 4/7/2013 11:14:00 AM

Yeah hard to know sometimes ...glad I didn't offend..sometimes I just want someone to tell me its OK to be mad...a while anyway....Donna

... Gigno

Date: 4/6/2013 2:18:00 PM

!!!

Donna Jones
Date: 4/6/2013 9:36:00 PM

:-) :-) :-) thanks

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 4/6/2013 1:34:00 AM

"Trusting you is more important than diamonds and gold.." well said. Beautiful poem. Enjoyed. Tfs

Donna Jones
Date: 4/6/2013 9:28:00 AM

Thank you Ravi...I know infidelity goes both ways, but nice gifts do not heal the hurt and are too often offered thinking they do...I appreciate your time reading my thoughts...Donna ..:-)

Jack Jordan

Date: 4/5/2013 10:10:00 PM

Beautifully written. Jack

Donna Jones
Date: 4/6/2013 9:29:00 AM

Thank you Jack...very nice to see you here this Saturday morning....Donna

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 4/5/2013 3:52:00 PM

Lovely thoughts, nice:) Jag

Donna Jones
Date: 4/5/2013 7:24:00 PM

Thanks Jag...feeling blue today.I guess...Donna

Nigel Fox

Date: 4/5/2013 3:06:00 PM

Lovely ! But we're only here once, you've got to take risks - life goes on !

Donna Jones
Date: 4/5/2013 7:34:00 PM

Risks yes but then comes a time you just let pain go on without you...thanks for stopping Donna

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/5/2013 2:59:00 PM

This is an amazing and charming write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this afternoon! What a powerful statement you have laid out within this clever little piece, Great Work!!

Donna Jones
Date: 4/5/2013 7:34:00 PM

Thanks Russell...appreciate it..Donna