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A Whisper Leads Me

In whispers, I hear a transcending voice, flowing through me like a peaceful river as it bubbles over the fins of every fish below. I am washed in its warmth as I walk down a dirt road leading me back to a lonely place called nowhere. The hushed voice resonates, lightly touching my heart. It is gentler than a butterfly landing on an oleander petal and more tender than a sleepy feline’s purr. Like a hummingbird’s wings in flight, the voice is soft yet strong, a sound in constant motion coasting down from the hills and rising from the dusty road into my soul. As I slowly step forward, the voice stays with me, encouraging me to keep moving. I can almost feel the gentle pull of another hand in mine. Then, as I look ahead, my path transforms from dirt to shimmering gold. In awe, I lift my eyes to treetops that reach a cloudless sky with sparkling leaves draped like garland across the horizon. Distant laughter whispers in sounds of joy, and stars align before me in streams of glorious sunlight. Serenity fills my every cell, and the loving voice of a father whispers to me, “You are on the right path. Welcome home.”
Written 6/12/20 for Regina Riddle's Whisper to Me Contest

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Date: 6/17/2020 7:01:00 AM
This is serene, enchanting and inspirational. I find bliss in the whispers that guide me on my path. God bless you Rhonda. Much love :)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/18/2020 5:36:00 PM
Thank you, Aditi! Rhonda xx
Date: 6/13/2020 5:57:00 AM
Great work :-) Checkout my Soupmail :-)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/15/2020 12:00:00 AM
Thank you for the visit, Sahil. Blessings, Rhonda
Date: 6/13/2020 3:50:00 AM
God's grace and enlightenment come into signs, calls, whispers.. that lead us to unknown paths that we might think they are of great harm to us.. but they turn to be of a great blessing.. Souls of beauty and Faith do listen to those whispers, decrypt them and get the right message.. Dear Rhonda, you have lent a caring connection of veneration, Faith and trust.. and I have followed your inspiring journey in awe! Great poetry and straight into my soul! A treat to read! My warmest wishes. Blessings
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/14/2020 11:59:00 PM
Thank you, Besma! Your lovely comments are kind and insightful. I'm grateful for your visit. Blessings to you, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/12/2020 5:52:00 PM
This is so beautiful, Rhonda! Every line, every word is so delicate, so carefully chosen, it creates a mysterious, serene feeling! Best wishes ..have a great weekend!
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/14/2020 11:54:00 PM
Thank you, Mala! Your words are so kind and uplifting. I appreciate your visit. Blessings to you, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/12/2020 3:42:00 PM
Lovely writing Rhonda so filled with lovely lines so smooth and delicate but holds one in its grip throughout. Have a blessed weekend, Gordon
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/14/2020 11:53:00 PM
Thanks, Gordon! I hope you had a wonderful weekend. Rhonda xx
Date: 6/12/2020 1:47:00 PM
Nothing quite like a welcome after a long journey! Well done! Aloha! Rico
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/14/2020 11:52:00 PM
Thank you, Rico! Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/12/2020 1:05:00 PM
Wow, a fave for me, Rhonda! I have been listening to the same voice. It never leads us astray. I don't usually care for poems with long lines, but this is an exception. Every word has meaning. Hugs, Carolyn
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/12/2020 1:10:00 PM
Thank you, Carolyn, for the kind visit and fave. I'm honored. I rarely write poems with long lines, myself, but this contest has a line max. I'll probably reformat after the contest is over. Thanks again and happy Friday, Rhonda xx

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