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A Walk In Solitude

The orange glow of the setting sun tattoos the horizon and the day is done hours of burdens and rewards subdued to allow for a walk in solitude Sleep fades into random thoughts attempts at meditation all are nought reflections embellish gratitude to allow for a walk in solitude The radiance of a golden sunrise lauds another day to idealize a renewal of tremendous multitude to allow for a walk in solitude Individuality of choice dispersion inevitably belongs to that person mercy a need in great magnitude to allow for a walk in solitude August 5, 2018 August 6, 2018 - For Your Poetry Journal Contest By Dear Heart a.k.a. Broken Wings Fourth Place August 7, 2018 - August 2018 Premiere Contest By Brian Strand Fourth Place

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Kedar Ingale

Date: 8/25/2018 1:41:00 PM

Loved the way , this poem has been written.First three lines of every stanza make a way for the main line to sink in reader's head.Simply marvellous.

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/26/2018 1:21:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading and for this lovely comment.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 8/10/2018 8:11:00 PM

Wow, does this write ROCK, Susan. I love its 'jaunt' and tone very much. Be golden ... CayCay

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/10/2018 9:38:00 PM

Thanks, CayCay!

Roy Pett

Date: 8/10/2018 11:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in the two contests with your excellent poem, so well written. :))

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/10/2018 1:33:00 PM

Thanks, Roy. Appreciate you.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 8/9/2018 9:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem, Susan - blessings and best wishes for more! :-)

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/10/2018 1:32:00 PM

Thank you! :)

Constance La France

Date: 8/9/2018 3:01:00 PM

Susan congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned piece ~

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/9/2018 7:55:00 PM

Thank you! It was an interesting contest. Thank you for sponsoring. I am honored to be on your list. :)

Abdul Malik

Date: 8/9/2018 10:15:00 AM

The tussle between the hustle and bustle of the days and the fitful nights is nicely expressed here. Congrats Susan.

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/10/2018 1:32:00 PM

Thank you so much. I appreciate your input.

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/8/2018 9:25:00 AM

A beautiful poem exulting the precious beauty of solitude. Congrats on your well deserved win, Susan.

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/9/2018 12:10:00 AM

Thanks, Line.

John Gondolf

Date: 8/8/2018 8:31:00 AM

A walk at sunrise is the perfect way to start a day. Congrats on your win, Susan.

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/9/2018 12:09:00 AM

Thank you, John!

Dia Zafar

Date: 8/7/2018 10:04:00 AM

well done Susan.

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/7/2018 12:23:00 PM

Thank you!

Michael Tor

Date: 8/7/2018 1:40:00 AM

Susan a write that we can all relate to, words that bring out feelings and emotions and a sense of healing in a solitude walk. Nicely written, and contest worthy...

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/7/2018 2:05:00 AM

Why thank you! Such a nice comment. Good to hear from you. Would love to read some recent poems by you... :)

Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 8/6/2018 11:19:00 PM

A wise and sensitive, beautifully crafted poem; giving great pleasure in the reading. Thank you for that, Susan.

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/7/2018 1:29:00 AM

Thank you for such a lovely comment! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/6/2018 3:13:00 PM

wonderful, Susan. I think constance will love this one in her contest.

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/7/2018 1:28:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea! I appreciate your support.

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/6/2018 3:01:00 PM

Amazing free flowing poetry. love it,

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/7/2018 1:22:00 AM

Thank you, Harry!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/5/2018 8:40:00 PM

I like the way the phrase, 'to allow for a walk in solitude' anchors the profound thoughts and imagery in this lovely poem. Well-done, Susan! ~ Gershon

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/6/2018 12:33:00 AM

Thank you, Gershon. Lovely comment.:)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/5/2018 11:41:00 AM

beautifully written, so mellow and reflective, susan... huggs

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/5/2018 4:48:00 PM

Thanks, nette.

Sand Blown

Date: 8/5/2018 4:45:00 AM

"...burdens...gather for a walk... reflections...depart... renewal of...chance... mercy..need... desirous..." intricate...man...very intricate

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/5/2018 6:31:00 AM

Thanks for reading and commenting.