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A View of the Vineyard

The chartreuse pearls hung on the pregnant vine as whispered jade of leaves in autumn breeze. The necklaces of trellis did entwine like clefs of absinthe notes in verdant keys. 3/5/18 Original poem: Grape Harvest 10/20/17 Rithium Divisa 2 Contest Sponsor: Gregory R Barden

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Suzanne Delaney

Date: 10/9/2023 4:46:00 AM

Love the imagery in this one , Dale: Welcome back and keep on writing. SuZ

John Hamilton

Date: 5/26/2020 10:44:00 AM

Nice to read this one today Dale hope you are well and will write again soon, you are missed!

Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/26/2020 12:44:00 PM

Thanks very much, John.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/25/2020 3:22:00 PM

Such a beautiful insert of your poem, Dale. Love the imagery. Eve

Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 4/25/2020 6:18:00 PM

Thank you so much, Eve.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/18/2020 12:08:00 PM

Amazingly beautiful, Dale, as always. Congrats on your win.

John Watt

Date: 4/18/2020 9:07:00 AM

Dale, lovely flow of iambic pentameter in your lush description of the grape harvest. "The chartreuse pearls"... congrats on your win in Greg's contest.

Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 4/25/2020 6:18:00 PM

Thank you, John.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 4/18/2020 8:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your well-deserved 10th place in the Rithimus Divisa Poetry Contest, Dale - this was a VERY close contest, with so many wonderful writes - blessings! :o)

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/9/2020 3:54:00 PM

Your beautiful artistry entwines with my imagination in the most spectacular way, Dale. Such an elegant and lovely view indeed! Warmest wishes always, dear poet.. ~Susan

Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 4/9/2020 9:01:00 PM

Thanks so much, Susan, lovely to hear from you.

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/5/2020 10:16:00 AM

Very nice! :)

Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 3/5/2020 10:51:00 AM

Thank you, Heidi.

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/5/2020 8:58:00 AM

Wowza. Beautiful, Dale.

Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 3/5/2020 10:51:00 AM

Thanks very much, Line.