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A Tender Heart

Her tender heart set her apart from anyone I’d ever known, and from the start it did impart a gift of love so gently shown. When first we met I'll ne'er forget the way her heart lit up the room; this sweet brunette whose silhouette with curves that caused my heart to zoom. And when she spoke my feelings woke and something stirred within my soul; with tender strokes her heart invokes such longings which I can’t control. Beyond compare her heart so fair, I’m lifted up as dreams now soar, and so we dare our lives to share our hearts are one for evermore.
March 6, 2021

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Date: 3/31/2021 3:33:00 PM
What a beautiful poem about the love of your life!! Very nicely expressed!
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/31/2021 3:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, Smita, I'm glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 3/24/2021 6:09:00 AM
Absolutely terrific!!! Well written. Flows amazingly like an ocean wave. A true poet. Thank you.
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/24/2021 6:23:00 AM
Thank you so much, Michael, I am humbled by your thoughts and comments. I'm glad you enjoyed my simple rhyme. John
Date: 3/10/2021 6:59:00 AM
John, So beautiful and tender and appreciative of the loving gifts received. "a gift of love so gently shown" Lovely ! Hugs, Susan :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/11/2021 2:17:00 AM
Thank you sweet Susan, for the wonderful comments, I appreciate you. I’m glad you enjoyed it. Hugs, John
Date: 3/10/2021 4:24:00 AM
A very romantic verse John, your rhyming is impeccable. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/10/2021 5:34:00 AM
Thanks, Tom, I appreciate it. All is well here, I had my second covid vaccine dose last week so I am looking forward to moving on with life. I hope all is well with you and yours. John
Date: 3/7/2021 1:56:00 PM
This is beautiful!!! I simply love it... You have written such amazing rhymes and thoughts. Brilliantly done. Love and prayers sent your way. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/7/2021 7:55:00 PM
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and comments, Gina, I’m glad you enjoyed it. Hugs, John
Date: 3/6/2021 6:18:00 PM
"Her tender heart sets her apart" This thought alone, says so much about her. This is so beautiful and romantic. May your heart always drift in the sky, my dear sweet friend. I am placing this in my favorites. Because.. :) Hugs, Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/7/2021 5:15:00 AM
Thank you, Brandy, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. Hugs.
Date: 3/6/2021 10:20:00 AM
What a beautiful tribute to this exceptional woman, whom I suppose became your soulmate and life partner. You've penned such a wonderful poem here, John. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/6/2021 5:31:00 PM
Thanks so much, Milton, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. I’m glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 3/6/2021 9:23:00 AM
A lovely rhyme, enjoyed very much, could be a hallmark card! (that's a complement)
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/6/2021 5:27:00 PM
Thanks, John, I appreciate it. I expect Hallmark’s call any day now.
Date: 3/6/2021 6:36:00 AM
So beautiful! Guessing you have your wife in mind.
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/6/2021 5:24:00 PM
Thank you, Kim, I appreciate your comments. She is the light that lights my world.
Date: 3/6/2021 5:49:00 AM
I'm delighted to see you posting again, John. It's been a while, but this one was worth the wait. It's filled with loving thoughts and a future of togetherness. Your double rhymes are very well created.
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/6/2021 6:38:00 AM
You got it...life is taxing right now. :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/6/2021 6:11:00 AM
You must be a numbers guy, plunged deep within tax papers. Hugs back to you, John.
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/6/2021 5:54:00 AM
Thank you for visiting and sharing your thoughts, Jenna. Lately I have been quite busy at work, about 80 hours a week, and there hasn't been much time for poetry...or life for that matter. But that's what I do this time of year. Hope all is well with you. Hugs, John

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