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A Talk With Dad

Hi Dad, I guess we all will see our time and all will pass Sometimes I lie awake and cry, longing for another chance So much I never said, so often I said too much Once in a while i'll drive by where Grandma's house was Stop and reminisce awhile Wonder what Mom's childhood was like in that old farm house Remember you saying how you loved the place Talking about how you walked all those miles to see Mom At night the sounds of crickets and the truck traffic miles away on 54 Fourth of July gathering on the back porch and in the yard, beer on tap Burnt fingers holding sparklers at night, Grandma's cooking Old Jack barking and howling, uncles throwing horse shoes Kids playing baseball in the grass between Grandma's and Chick's place Did we lose the Utopia we dreamed about, never recognizing it What I'd give to take you for a ride again, through your old haunts Caught up in the nostalgia of your childhood and mine. Times were tougher, times were better, Paradise lost. You measured riches in family, friends and neighbors Somewhere, somehow the present generation lost that Seems as I got older, you got wiser, couldn't see it as a child Never said I love you, Dad often enough Never said thank you, Dad for the lessons on life and living Got to go now, i'll say a prayer for you and mom Who knows, maybe we'll find that peace within us That we had growing up and you were here.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/2/2012 2:50:00 PM
Reading this reminded me a bit of my own past. You have pervasive descriptiveness in this write.
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Date: 1/12/2012 12:38:00 AM
I really felt this one Vince..) God bless you now...!
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Date: 12/12/2011 12:02:00 AM
Vince, I do believe that the original song was done by "HARRY Belifonte"Respectfully kenny
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Date: 12/11/2011 10:34:00 PM
Vince, What a Wonderful Poem. I agree with Chef's comment. I Thank-You for your Prayers and concerns for Chef's Health. He is a changed man. His Eyes have life again, his hands still shake but not as before. He will be home Dec.20 I am so impressed with You and his Poetry Family. I see why he Loves all of YOU. I want to join POETRYSOUP but I am Computer Illiterate.You are very special to Chef, even though he has not wrote to you in awhile but he will , promise kenny
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Date: 11/18/2011 10:50:00 PM
Lovely.
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Date: 11/6/2011 9:32:00 AM
Your love for your dad is so evident in this write Vince, one of the lucky ones who has so many memories and that could learn so many life lessons from their father.. Really enjoyed this personal gem of yours.. Hope your Sunday is a great one ;) Wilma
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Date: 10/30/2011 7:29:00 AM
Dear Vince, Superb Write of Heartfelt Memories What a Grand reunion It will be when YOU see YOUR MOM and DAD again I envy YOU Hope All is Well with YOU and YOURS Sorry about not writing for so Long with LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry ( HG )
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Date: 10/27/2011 2:57:00 AM
A fine, heartfelt piece. Obviously a deeply personal write, but one that many readers will be able to at once identify with. All things must pass, as they say, but at least we still have our memories. Regards, Robert.
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Date: 10/26/2011 7:06:00 PM
Smile, *^_^* “I Love It When I Find This Hearts Jewels My Dear Precious & Priceless Vincent! * It Does Seem As Though Time Ebbs & Flows From Generation to Generation Amid Sooo Many Different Lights & Colours & So On & So Forth But, Love, Withstands The Test of It All *^_^* Beautiful Painting My Friend!” === My Love, Always, Jasper *
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