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A Sunny Day In Sixty Seven

A sunny day March sixty seven The day that you and I were wed Together we did pledge our troth A life together for us both Two years passed Then we were blessed With our precious son Our only one ~~~ We had our ups We had our downs But mostly smiles Not many frowns In latter years despite our fears Cancer took its toll We moved to be beside the sea For both Pisceans You and me With bulldog Bill We happily Embraced our precious time Then one sad day Bill slipped away Two months on and you were gone ~~~ So now I sit alone and ponder Our life together Our love forever At 3pm the sun shone down On this our wedding day My lovely dad gave me away Me twenty then You twenty three So young were you and I ~~~ Now standing gazing out to sea My darling dear I send to thee All my love eternally Oh joyous day I celebrate Our Wedding Anniversary Written 25th March 2021 ~~ married 25th March 1967 Contest All Yours (Mar 26) Sponsor Brian Strand FIRST PLACE

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Date: 3/31/2021 6:18:00 AM
I had a cousin that got married in July of 1967. This is a great write that reminded me of my female companion who passed away in May of 2016.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/6/2021 6:10:00 AM
Bless you Robert and thank you for your kind comments. So sorry to hear your partner passed. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/26/2021 6:15:00 PM
Such a beautiful write Ann...The person you love with always live in your heart....much love dear friend...Take Care.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/30/2021 12:22:00 PM
Oh bless you dear Carol ~ my heart is full of their love... Thank you my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/26/2021 7:33:00 AM
Love is forever. One day you will meet in heavenly bliss.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/30/2021 12:21:00 PM
Dearest Victor ~ love is forever ~ I long for that day... With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/26/2021 5:55:00 AM
Love never fades. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. Cheers - Gary
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/30/2021 12:20:00 PM
That is so true Gary and that is all I have to hold onto, but the love and memories are stronger than ever. Thank you for your visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/26/2021 3:53:00 AM
Happy Wedding Anniversary dear Ann and congratulations on your awesome win!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/30/2021 12:18:00 PM
Ohh bless you JCB for your lovely wishes and congratulations, so lovely to hear from you my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/25/2021 12:30:00 PM
What a beautiful piece Ann, you are really rolling back the years with lovely memories of of that great day that began a lifetime together. Hope you're well in these covid days, makes one wonder how long it's going to last? Blessings always,Gordon
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/30/2021 12:17:00 PM
Many thanks Gordon, such a long time ago now but the memories do not fade and neither does the love. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/24/2021 6:42:00 PM
A loving remembrance and tribute! A lovely write, Ann! Blessings, Kim M
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/25/2021 12:24:00 PM
Bless you dear Kim and I thank you for your lovely comments and visit, which I really appreciate. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/24/2021 5:36:00 PM
So touching, Ann. What a lovely tribute. The love never fades ~
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/25/2021 12:21:00 PM
Thank you dearest Line you are so right about love and in fact it gets stronger... with kindest thoughts Ann xx

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