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A Spooky Tale

A Spooky Tale Shadows slid silent across the cold stone floor, As pallid wraiths formed in the fast fading breeze. And came to rest by the broken kitchen door As a new moon rose unseen above the trees. Where no human walked that way any more Grey ghosts returned on this night of dark unease In that deserted place where the dead convened, Spoke together before daylight intervened. An Ottava Rima written in the original 11 syllable line form. For Spooky Rhyme Contest by Tania Kitchin. 10/25/2020

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Date: 11/11/2020 11:05:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats Barry:-) hugs Jan xx
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/11/2020 11:07:00 AM
Thank you very much, Jan. // Barry
Date: 11/6/2020 11:50:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great win in this spooky contest, Berry :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/7/2020 10:23:00 AM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise. // Barry
Date: 11/6/2020 11:50:00 AM
Barry, a big CONGRATS on your win with this descriptive piece. Janice
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/7/2020 10:23:00 AM
Thank you very much, Janice. // Barry
Date: 11/6/2020 10:42:00 AM
Barry, congratulations on your win in Tania's 8 lines of Spooky contest, with this chilling poem_ Constance
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/7/2020 10:22:00 AM
Thank you very much, Constance. // Barry
Date: 11/5/2020 1:56:00 PM
Barry, congratulations on your winning placement with you spooky and creative poem!
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/6/2020 10:29:00 AM
Thank you very much for my win, Tania. // Barry
Date: 11/2/2020 5:23:00 PM
eerily remarkable, making me feel i was in some gothic environ, barry... thanks for your visit!...huggs
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/6/2020 10:30:00 AM
Thank you very much, Nette. // Barry
Date: 11/1/2020 1:07:00 AM
Very atmospheric, i feel chilled reading your spooky lines Barry... I am not a fan of halloween!:-) hugs jan xx
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/1/2020 11:30:00 AM
Thank you very much, Jan. Some poems are just fun to write. // Barry.
Date: 10/31/2020 5:33:00 PM
Very well written, Barry. it evokes that mysterious atmosphere of the season. Gosh my dog is barking like crazy. I had not imagined trick or treaters would be out tonight, but I suppose they have decided to do it. I had put a bowl out just in case. I guess I better stay upstairs to give out candies and make sure nobody empties the bowl. Happy Halloween
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/1/2020 11:28:00 AM
Thank you very much, Andrea. We have not had trick or treaters this year. I think they have been frightened off by that spooky virus. Take care. // Barry

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