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A sonnet of attraction and desire

In the quiet glow of dawn, Where shadows play and merge, There she stands - A vision, a muse, a silent whisper of desire. Her beauty, an unspoken verse, Crafting chaos within the tranquil heart. Love, an unbridled wave, Crashes against the shores of reason, Where attraction, a relentless tide, Pulls with the gravity of a thousand moons. She moves, and the world seems to sway, A delicate dance of light and grace. Eyes, deep pools of mystique, Drawing souls into depths unknown. Her smile, a curve that sets the world aflame, Lighting the dark alleys of longing. In her presence, time fades, A fleeting wisp in the wind, Leaving behind the scent of blooming jasmine, A memory etched in the essence of desire. Attraction, a force beyond the grasp of minds, Speaks in silent gestures and unspoken words. In her, the epitome of beauty and grace, A thousand sonnets find their muse. Love, in its purest form, Transcends the physical, Finding solace in the beauty of her soul. For in her laughter, in her gentle touch, Lies the promise of dawn after the darkest night. Yet, amidst this tempest of feeling, A question lingers, A whisper among the roaring winds of passion - Does she perceive the depth of this attraction, The magnitude of this love? Or does she walk, unaware, A beautiful dream, Adored from afar, A beacon of what could be? In the silence that follows, Only the heart knows true, For in the realm of love and attraction, Beauty is not merely seen, But deeply felt, A connection beyond the confines of the visible, A dance of souls in the eternal waltz of existence.

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Date: 3/14/2024 12:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Sorry I am late. Have a blessed day with your win..........
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Date: 3/13/2024 8:13:00 PM
Fantastic write! A well deserbed POTD. Panagiota
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Date: 3/13/2024 7:01:00 PM
' Beauty is not merely seen, but deeply felt. ' There's so much truth within this statement. Your thoughts are dreamy, romantic and breathtaking, all at the same time. This thought leaves me in complete awe. ' There she stands - A vision, a muse, a silent whisper of desire. ' You've created a masterpiece, Madhav. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy
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Date: 3/13/2024 9:48:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, Very nicely penned
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Date: 3/13/2024 7:12:00 AM
Lovely poetry Madhav, love it all especially the last line “A dance of souls in the eternal waltz of existence.” Congratulations on receiving poem of the day… Beryl
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Date: 3/13/2024 6:22:00 AM
Every line is charming and brimming with the unanswered question of love and desire. Very nice Madhav. Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)
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Date: 3/13/2024 5:31:00 AM
A whisper among the roaring winds of passion - Does she perceive the depth of this attraction, The magnitude of this love? So beautiful! congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 3/13/2024 5:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
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Date: 3/13/2024 5:27:00 AM
Awesome poem of love and beauty. Congrats on hitting the spotlight Madhav
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Date: 3/13/2024 5:21:00 AM
Dear Madhav, Congratulations on this well expressed POTD. The line, "love on a bridled wave, crashing on the shores of reason." Fantastic metaphors thru out, "a whisper among the roaring winds of passion, does she perceive the depth of this attraction, the magnitude of this love?" Expressed so eloquently through out. I will fav it now. Blessings
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Date: 3/13/2024 4:23:00 AM
Many congratulations on POTD Madhav. This is so beautifully written, sensual and captivating. ‘ A dance of souls in the eternal waltz of existence’ is my favourite line although they are all wonderful. Loved it! Thank you for sharing. :)
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Date: 3/13/2024 3:48:00 AM
Madhav, a beautiful poem, congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 3/13/2024 3:23:00 AM
Congratulations on receiving POTD honour with your enchanting sonnet on attraction and desire! Thoughtful and beautiful!
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Date: 3/13/2024 2:50:00 AM
beautiful Sonnet. I especially liked the last two lines. Congratulations on your POTD designation. Enjoy!
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Date: 3/13/2024 2:16:00 AM
- Beautiful poem, congratulations on your p.o.t.d. Madhav :) -
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Date: 3/13/2024 1:43:00 AM
Oh wow! An outstanding love poem, Madhav, so soulful and bewitching! A clear fav for me ~ warmest congratulations on POTD
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Date: 3/13/2024 12:53:00 AM
Wow a lovely potd expressing the love and deepest desire! Congratulations
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