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A Son Asked

~A Son Asked~ How can i give when i have nothing? Because nobody has nothing you have everything but did not know you had everything. How will i know if i am in love? Everything you do is richer and fuller when love is there only when you fall in love when you desire with passion when you miss the flame in her eyes when you envy the ground she walks on when you leave her and regret doing so when your dream is all about her wanting her to be next to you now this moment this second that is called a dream come true! Love. Is living a dream? Only when you wake up in the morning full of love stay in love the whole day no matter what look at the twilight smelling the perfume from your balcony having a reason to get dressed to go out full of happiness energy plan an aim with a goal & success this is when you start living it becomes a dream come true. Is forgiving a dream? Only when you regret if anybody was hurt if you stop judging & being resentful and you can sleep at night with no remorse it becomes a beautiful dream come true. Is being human a dream? Only when you will feel other peoples pain when you will open your heart and even shed a tear that is being human it becomes a dream come. Is sharing a dream? Only when you start sharing even a piece of bread give unconditionally listen to the voice & respond feel the beating of a heart be everywhere it becomes a dream. Is friendship a dream? Only when you become friends for life it becomes a dream come true. Is being compassionate a dream? Only when you love life when you feel you can climb on top of the mountain and envy the beyond & feel compassionate it becomes a dream. Is being intelligent a dream? Only when you use your brain towards the right directions right decisions be patient tolerant accept change when needed proud of who you are persistent succeed over the years it will become a dream come true. Is having a mother a dream? I can only think about this reply: Since birth until the end a mother is the shadow of each child its an everlasting love this is a dream come true. How will you know if you are a writer: Only when you never stop writing. Therese Bacha Contest for PD About inspirational poems. 6/3/2013 Win as Honorable Mention.

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Date: 5/1/2014 6:25:00 PM
hey im doing a speech on this poem but for the speech i need your background information but i googled you and i cant find it!!!! but if you could supply with when you are born where you live what themes do you usually write about and what contributions you think you have made to the world of literature i would be so glad but if you dont feel comfortable giving me the information i understand. thank you
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Date: 4/15/2013 1:41:00 AM
"When you feel you can climb the top of the mountain and envy the beyond" This was a real stand out line for me. Intense! This was uniquely written and makes me think more deeply about the things I have... and just how lucky it is that I have them. I hope to never stop writing... thanks for the inspiration this morning!
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/15/2013 7:26:00 AM
Hi Timothy, I am so happy to read all your faithful comments, very encouraging to keep writing. Have a lovely day. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 3/7/2013 6:14:00 PM
Congrats, Therese. Outstanding. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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Therese Bacha
Date: 3/7/2013 6:52:00 PM
Thank you Ralph, for the lovely comments, i feel more committed to write. Love Terry
Date: 3/7/2013 6:19:00 AM
Exceptional sweet lady.So.many lessons here...everyone must treasure.Yes i can understand each stanza to.its deptb..bravo..You are a great inspiration.
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Therese Bacha
Date: 3/7/2013 6:41:00 AM
Here is my friend Charmaine again wiht beautiful comments, thank you so much.....love Terry xoxo
Date: 3/7/2013 2:29:00 AM
Therese, wow! I really loved your beautiful words penned. Never stop writing. Congrats on your win. Connie
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Date: 3/7/2013 6:38:00 AM
Thank you again, i get encouraged when i receive comments from all of you..LOve Terry xoxo
Date: 3/6/2013 9:42:00 PM
HI TERRY, ;-) congratulations with your awesome win, in my contest. always~ LINDA
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Therese Bacha
Date: 3/6/2013 10:37:00 PM
Hi PD, as usual i am so so happy you liked my poem, again i say its my honor to be chosen by you. Thank you so much PD. I love your contests, i am hooked now. Love Terry xoxoxoxo
Date: 2/21/2013 10:46:00 PM
I do like the way you write your stories/poems Terry ;} thank you for coming to read my words By the sea" ;} xoxo's
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Date: 2/22/2013 8:56:00 AM
Hi Debbie, i like seeing your name winning in every contest, you are a winner as you write beautifully..thank you for visiting.....Love Terry xoxo
Date: 2/18/2013 10:09:00 AM
Hello Terry,,,, first of all, I'm so grateful for you kindness and comments on my poetry. And also, wanted to say that I can see your heart ...read between the lines of your poem here. The solid answers given to a son about love......tells so much of a person's character. Well done!
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Date: 2/18/2013 10:20:00 AM
Oh Carrie, thank you, i am so encouraged to keep writing due to such beautiful sharing from the heart. Thank you so much......Love Terry xoxo
Date: 2/14/2013 9:39:00 PM
Too long.
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Date: 2/16/2013 8:21:00 PM
I will take your advice into consideration thank you....Terry
Date: 2/13/2013 5:49:00 PM
Hi my dearest poetess Therese... i love your amazing sharing in this poem... so nice :) thanks you for your great write... happy Valentine my friend :) <3 Sk
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Date: 2/13/2013 6:55:00 PM
Thank you for calling me poetess, i will believe it...Happy Valentine to you to.... so nice of you.....Love Terry xoxo
Date: 2/13/2013 8:42:00 AM
Hi Terry; I hope you are doing good. This is a great poem. All these questions asked. You gave good answers. There was a song a long time ago, sang by Doris Day, Que Sera Sera - What ever Will Be Will Be. Goes like this - When I was just a little girl, I asked my mother - What will I be? Will I be pretty? Will I be rich? Here is what she said to me. Que Sera Sera - your future I can not see. Que sera sera. Lucilla
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Date: 2/13/2013 9:05:00 AM
Yes Lucy, that song is right,,,i remember....you always lift my morning moral.....thank you so much.......Love Terry xoxo
Date: 2/9/2013 11:26:00 AM
just stopping by this one again to tell you hello and have a great Saturday.
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Date: 2/9/2013 12:03:00 PM
Hi Andrea, thank you.hope you have a wonderful weekend....see you later..love Terry xoxo
Date: 2/9/2013 7:36:00 AM
- The children ask, and we try as best we can to give the right answers. - And we learn as long as we live. - Nothing comes free in life. - Thank you for your very good poem, Terry. - - Have a wonderful weekend, relax. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/9/2013 12:02:00 PM
Yes everything is about kids.....thank you Ann, have a wonderful weekend...Terry xoxo
Date: 2/8/2013 8:21:00 PM
A true ending Terry, i wish to become the dreams i desire of... I love the thought about the friends, it becomes a dream... a wonderful poem with inspirational words and thoughts.. xox~PD
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Date: 2/8/2013 11:18:00 PM
Hi darling where have you been????? your photos are so cute.......i am glad you liked it, for me a means a lot........thanks...see you soon....Love Terry xoxo
Date: 2/7/2013 10:00:00 PM
Wonderful !!!very well thought out and true I loved it Thanks for the great read
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Date: 2/8/2013 5:36:00 AM
Thank you so much, i wish you luck.....Terry
Date: 2/7/2013 6:25:00 PM
Lots of reflective thought in this one, my dear friend. The dream within a dream theme, what is the dream? Nicely done. Our brains are capable of so very much. We have only scratched the surface of what God blessed us with , if we but learn to use it. So lovely seeing you and this poem here today.
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Date: 2/8/2013 5:02:00 PM
Hi Andrea, i am glad you liked it....not too short..i hope you are fine....love Terry xoxo
Date: 2/7/2013 5:25:00 PM
I love these true words from your heart. <3 And I must thank you for all the times you stoped by with your words of kindness.Always very much appreciated. :o)
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Therese Bacha
Date: 2/8/2013 5:00:00 PM
Hi Dan.....thank you for passing by....have a wonderful evening...Terry xoxo
Date: 2/7/2013 3:45:00 PM
This is an extremely intriguing write my friend! I find it my dream to write, I love to write, and I will always write! And I feel you love to write as well! As this poem shows your true talent, very nicely too! Great Work!!
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Date: 2/7/2013 3:50:00 PM
My first best friend to read my new thoughts......thank you Russell.......it is always so nice of you.....love Terry xoxo

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