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A Secret World

Along a country road, beyond the guard rail, past the visible vines, lurks an ancient jungle. Most who travel pass don’t have an inkling of the depth of the danger— this cliff so close by, this mystery in their midst. The steep-slanting ground and lush vegetation in quintessential green drop, and drop again to a long-forgotten brook that one can only hear-- though perhaps by peering, one can glimpse refracted light sparkling from its surface. After blithely flowing through this lost world of twisted roots and tree trunks, the creek quickly merges with the Quaboag River, and, coming into normalcy, loses some allure. Another mystery calls from this roughly hewn valley (gouged out by ice sheets and still too severe for human encroachment). More resonant than the birds and deeper than the stream, it registers in a region somewhere in the soul. Taking one by surprise, this precarious paradise suddenly feels familiar, as though we’d been there once, as though we all belonged there, long, long ago, before the last ice age, in some primal place before mills and industry, before roads and rails.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 5/31/2022 6:49:00 AM
Seems you feel the same way about nature as I do; it's the most amazing and spiritual thing on this earth; our connection to it makes the soul sing. Very nice penning Carol.
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Carol Mays
Date: 7/2/2022 9:38:00 PM
Thank you. I thought I had replied to your comment last month, but I don't see any such reply. Sorry about that. I will check again for nature poems on your page.
Date: 5/31/2021 7:22:00 AM
Beautiful way to honor and share such "secret worlds" ~
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Date: 7/17/2020 12:05:00 AM
Loved your poem contrasting the modern and manmade with the ancient, and the untamed, Carol. Beautiful poem!
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Carol Mays
Date: 9/30/2020 7:27:00 PM
Thank you. Yes, you nailed it. That's exactly what I was trying to do.
Date: 11/7/2019 5:11:00 AM
Lovely Carol...Most likely YOU were there before, before...
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Carol Mays
Date: 11/7/2019 12:20:00 PM
Thank you. One can dream.

Book: Shattered Sighs