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A Sea of Calm

On a sea of calm I long to be you and a breeze to set me free the water sparkling a soothing flow the sun surrounding with a warming glow your eyes shimmering in pools of peace setting all my worries off to ease my lips mouthing words of sensitivity holding on to forever in this long lost captivity on a sea of calm I long to be you and a breeze to set me free floating off into the great unknown heartbeats drifting into all you've shown

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Date: 9/13/2018 8:52:00 PM
Tim Tam Man strikes again!!!! Beautiful, matey /|\
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Date: 9/13/2018 10:07:00 AM
great words Tim.....Seren
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Date: 9/13/2018 10:06:00 AM
great words Tim.....Seren
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Date: 9/12/2018 3:50:00 PM
This poem fills my thought with serenity,a sweet breeze, and the calmness of the sea..I can almost swim away with it .Very beautiful ,romantic and calming indeed .A fave.
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Date: 9/11/2018 3:51:00 PM
How lovely this is Tim....it left me floating on air amidst the clouds! : )
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Date: 9/11/2018 3:35:00 PM
Mr. Romance strikes again. This is beautiful Tim, tugs at the heart softly.
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Date: 9/11/2018 2:04:00 PM
Why do couplets always look so appealing especially when they are well written such as this. Lovely poem Tim
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/11/2018 2:06:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend

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